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Story written on September 9, 2012 by kins40.
Bette swallowed as the beautiful face revealed itself to her. If she believed in Angels she was sure she would hear their choir sing right now.
It all fitted perfectly, the kind warm eyes, the mesmerising voice and now the exquisite and delicate face.
"So that’s it.." Bette stuttered almost disappointed that their encounter was over, "….no Novocain shot, no drill, no fillings."
"I’m afraid not," Tina concluded for her, handing her a little tube of teething gel, "Just a little more TLC on your gums and in the meantime help them recover with this."
Bette felt the chair lower and the back straighten up. Her time with the dentist was now over. In normal circumstances she would simply bolt out of the door and not look back but a strange nervous feeling at her impending departure kept her firmly seated in her chair. She should have been elated that no ungodly treatment had befallen her but she was almost bereft at having to leave.
"So that’s it then?" she somehow wanted to make sure as she fidgeted awkwardly with the blue napkin that had fallen in her lap.
The dentist was still smiling but as Bette lifted her head to look at her, the blonde averted her eyes seemingly just as uneasy to see her patient leave.
"Yes…that’s it." The dentist’s voice came out almost strangled.
Bette slid off the end of the chair and heard the soft voice ask behind her.
"Would you like a prize?"
A child-like glee fell over Bette’s face not at the thought of the prize but at the thought of the few seconds more she would have to interact with the young woman to retrieve her reward.
She turned around and saw the enchanting dentist stand awkwardly with a giant jar filled with multicoloured bouncy balls.
Bette’s swagger returned and she stepped back to the middle of the room.
"Yes," she smiled picking a pink ball filled with silver glitter before replacing it into the jar as she looked straight into hazel eyes. "I would very much like a prize…. Have dinner with me."
12.
Tina walked slowly letting her left hand trace the spines of the endless rows of books in the library.
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kins…did I ever tell you how much I adore and love your writing? I truly do…I can’t wait for the multi-chapter story.
Girl, you can spin a story. You are awesome
Kins40, will you marry me?
Damn…..kins you come out of nowhere and just rock my world like this, only to leave for god knows how long. I don’t care just as long as you keep coming back. Now that is a characteristic of a player LOL ;@)
I forgot my offering of the number 14. Thanks for including me. 14 is special to me because in a few short days my partner and I will celebrate 25 years together on September 14th. How appropriate that you would choose now to include my number. I know I have gushed over your writing before. I continue to adore you. T
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Simply FANTASTIC Kins, just beautifully, wonderfully and lovingly fantastic. Thanks for popping back in and bringing wonderful stories. Can hardly wait for the multi-chapter story you will bring us. Thanks again.
Truly awesome writing – your words just seem to soothe any trouble away.
Ditto to everything above, well, maybe not the marry me part since its not too appropriate at this time. But, damn girl, you write great stories. I loved the Savannah slip in there… still one of my favorite stories. Thanks for the update.
Awesome! …Especially the wolf story. thanks kins40.
Magnifique, et une bouffée d’air frais pour mes poumons.
perfect!! These are the best short stories ever. :) Can’t wait to see what else you’ll bring us. Thank you!!
phenomenal, magnificent, extraordinary…I could go on, but you get my point. Can’t wait to see what you have in store with this next story.
Wow! Beautiful! Just beautiful!
My god woman, these stories are perfect. I could sit here and read them all day if there was more. Cannot wait for more stories from you. Thanks :)
Excellent,simply excellent.Thank you very much.
I love your beautiful writing. So well done. You brighten cloudy days.
majestic…
Thank you for every word. Simply beautiful love.
Great kins – I came to your stories late but delighted I found you! A true storyteller with the ability in your words to make me laugh and make me cry – thank you.
Do you think you might write some more Savannah some time?!?