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Only Ever You – Chapter 4
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As hurt as she was, Bette sounded like she had just solved the million dollar question. She was filled with satisfaction even as her heart broke in two.
Tina on the other hand clenched her fist against her forehead, giving it a few taps with her knuckles in her growing frustration.
“You are just so .. thick headed sometimes”
As much as she fought to hold onto her composure, Tina was quickly falling apart. Her mind drifted to the morning and the latest conversation and had with her mother, how her life seemed to be crumbling before her very eyes. She was tired of everything, Bette’s accusations rapidly pushing her over the edge.
“Does it really sound that extreme?” Bette continued, too caught up in her theory that she hadn’t seen Tina for the ticking time bomb that she was. “I mean, what other explanation could there be? What would make more sense than you two messing around-”
“My mother is dying, you asshole!”
The entire courtyard fell silent, the only sound came from Tina as she struggled for breath. She was practically gasping for air, tears sliding down her cheeks in endless streams as she looked at Bette with a hate the brunette would have never imagined be directed at her.
Stunned to her very core at Tina’s proclamation, Bette found herself at a loss for words. She felt like the worst person in the world, the broken expression on the blonde’s face an image she would never be able to forget.
“Tina .. I-”
Tina’s lip quivered as she swiped her purse from the chair with more force than intended, “Just leave me alone”
With that she stormed off leaving a mortified Bette standing in a spot where all eyes were on her.
“Nice going” Brenda tsked as the beeper clipped to her waist went off. She twisted the device as she read the code, upset that she wouldn’t be able to go after Tina. She looked up to Bette who seemed on the verge of tears herself, the sight only fueling Brenda’s rage. Bette didn’t deserve to be sad for the pain she had so obviously caused Tina despite being in the dark about things or not. There was simply no excuse, not to Brenda anyway. “How about you listen to what I said earlier and leave? Things were better off without you here”
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Hi! Thank you for the new update!
I don’t remember if i already said it – but so far i really don’t like Bette in this story. Even Brenda sounds more human than she.
Waiting for the next!
P.S. I really don’t care in any other chracters in stories besides Bette and Tina (and their childs), but i must say i never understood Danice in the show. For me they always were too “forcefully”. Dana with Lara seems more natural for me.
Hi !
I understand your frustrations but I’m sure you’ll come to love Bette eventually .. I hope ????
As for Dana .. I’ve always loved her with Lara too. My favorites will always be Bette and Tina but I decided to try something a little different with this story and give everyone a bigger role considering they all grew up together and they’ll be featured in a lot of scenes. Promise to always keep B & T as the main focus ????
Yeah, i still have hope in this Bette)
Thanks.
Hey, LxD:
Great chapter, poor Tina sacrificed herself all those years to take care of her mother and at the end, the old lady is dying.
Here is when we reflect on how selfish we are some times, and that is part of our growth as persons, and we see it in Bette’s ways to deal with her feelings for Tina, well you live and you learn.
I think, again Tina feels abandoned by Bette as it was in the past when Bette left her without seeing behind and Tina had to face all the sadness and work to take care of her mother, now again she feels desolated and misunderstood for the only person for who she has deep feelings, the one that is in her heart as the love of her life.
I hope Bette could find Tina and apologize and talk to her because she is the only one who can really console and love her, the only one who Tina wants and is waiting for.
I also hope that Dana will face Lara and perhaps Alice may have some chance with her.
About Shane and Carmen, well hopefully the brunette will realize that is time to get mature and stop going from bed to bed and from girl to girl and decide to settle with Carmen.
Thanks again for the chapter and PPS.
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Hey P.
I agree with everything you said!!!
Thanks for posting!
Oh dear I really don’t like Bette just against all my wanting to ! Please change her as soon as, please!
Don’t like Brenda and happy about that!
Enjoying getting involved with your take on the characters in the story and have faith in you being a B & T lover at heart :-)
SG
Thank you for the new part!
Like many others don’t like this Bette so far, but i trust you to make her better)
I understand Bette shes been in the dark all these years.. shes going off what she sees no ones telling her anything.. and Brenda’s like a bad penny. Touching Tina and her not pulling away untill Bette shows up.. Bette not know it’s more of a consoling touch. Even though deep down Brenda wished it was more.
It’s sad that this has gone on and no one has told Bette. Knowing she was blaming Tina for splitting up. See two of their closes friends hurting.i mean i undestand not wanting Bette to mess up her college path but after college filling her in.. easing both their pains.. but that just life when we need someone to but in their no where to be found.. but when you dont wish for meddling their they are.. destroying you..
I love the story and its very believable. Please post again soon. And thank you.
Very much enjoying your story.
Here we are coming to the end of August…..what happened? Bette has been searching for almost a month..did she find Tina? What about Tina’s mom? Is she still hanging on? As much as I am against any physical violence I want to smack Brenda up against the wall and hope her brain rattles enough to forget who she is as well as never remembering Tina! Please help and post again soon before I go out searching for anyone named Brenda!! LOL…now that I got that out of my system I love this please post again SOON!