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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2 – the NC 17 Version

    Story written on May 13, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53869
    Author Notes:

    the same story with more detail at the end. The day in Palm springs and B & T get some time to themselves.

    The brilliant mid-day sun beat down on the group of women as they sat on the patio by the pool of their hotel, watching the sights.

    "Are you part of this conversation, Shane?" Tina tapped Shane’s calf with her foot as she made the inquiry. Shane didn’t know what direction to turn to – everywhere she looked, women in various states of undress were enjoying the freedom that this weekend in Palm Springs represented. For many of them, the Dinah Shore weekend was an escape not only from the mediocrity of their everyday lives, but also from the restrictions that invariably accompanied that mediocrity.

    "Sorry Tina, did you ask me something," Shane responded without making eye contact with anyone at the table.

    "God Shane, you are the personification of the phrase, ‘like a kid in a candy store,’" Tina was laughing at Shane, but couldn’t help noticing some of the women passing by as she glanced around, albeit in a more surreptitious fashion than Shane felt necessary.

    Bette was taking in this display and couldn’t help but comment on Tina’s wandering gaze.

    "T, I’m sitting right here, do ya think you could be a bit more subtle?"

    "Ah settle down Bette, it’s okay if you look at the menu, as long as you don’t eat out," Alice waved off Bette’s feigned concern.

    Tina met Bette’s eyes with hers. "You know you’ve got nothing to worry about, babe," she said as she brought Bette’s palm to her mouth and kissed it, maintaining her grasp after she lowered it to her lap. Bette turned her palm to rest on Tina’s knee and casually started moving it up her thigh until she felt the sting of a light but brisk slap.

    "Behave," Tina warned Bette quietly and then leaned closer so only she could hear. "I think I’m pretty lucky that after eight years together, I can’t think of anything I’d rather do than ***** you. Just not here."

    Bette’s closed her eyes as Tina whispered this statement in her ear. It took everything to keep from audibly moaning. She could feel Tina’s hot breath on the side of her face and felt her take her earlobe lightly between her teeth and ending the gentle nibble with a kiss before backing away.

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    2. loved it! im more of a alice and dana fan more than a bette and tina fan, but i loved it. u should write one like that about alice and dana..lol. keep them comin. ur really talented

    4. Hey I’m honoured. How was that for you;-) I think you’ll find it great for me and the rest of the gang. Wonderful – congratulations you are not now a sex scene virgin! I’d never have known it was your first time;-) Remember practice makes perfect!

    7. although i enjoyed the other version of this chapter…I REALLY REALLY enjoyed the revision of this chapter. I loved these lines…”Just give me a minute,” Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

      “We have the rest of our lives, T…” Bette responded.”

      Beautiful…i can’t wait until you post your next chapter…hopefully tina will return the pleasure to bette.

    9. That was a satisfying scene of eroticism between two women in love. Like the scene in ep 9 of the show, I could feel their regard for each other through the passion.
      Thanks for editing.
      And I signed up for the Paypal option the first week. I only say this to encourage others to do so. It’s important to support the sites that support us. Thank you.

    13. you’re the first writer in a long time to make me run the gamut of emotions i’m going through right now. with a complete absence of a girlfriend, saying i’m a little frustrated would be the understatement of the century. now i’m a little more frustrated, but in the good, noatalgic, i-just-put-myself-in-that-situation kind of frustrated. your writing is truly a breath of fresh air. just what i needed. i was wondering…do you think you could beta read for me? you seem adept enough that you would catch the small things and correct them as needed. just email me if you’re interested. illuminati_goddess@hotmail.com
      you’ve earned my admiration as a fellow writer. thanks for giving us all the honor of reading your work.

    16. This is just so damn hot! Great revisement…I ended up doing the exact same thing. First time writer here myself, and I know the hesitation that comes along with the first “love scene” It seems I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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