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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2 – the NC 17 Version

    Story written on May 13, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    the same story with more detail at the end. The day in Palm springs and B & T get some time to themselves.

    Bette loosened her grasp on her own hand as she, for the second time that day, started unfastening the buttons on Tinas top. This time there would be no interruptions. Tina rested her hands on Bettes forearms as she moved her way up, finally ending by tossing the blouse on the chair by the bed. Tina turned to face her and placed her hands on Bettes hips, pulling her closer.

    I really wanted you that nightI couldnt believe you were being so polite. It just made me want you more They were face to face as they spoke of their mutual desire. Bette reached around to remove Tinas bra and let it slip off her body to rest on the floor between them. Bette then leaned in to kiss her, but just as their lips were about to make contact, Tina pulled her head back and smiled mischievously.

    Youre in a teasing mood, are you? Bette asked as she lightly ran her fingertips up and down Tinas back. She could feel Tina shiver underneath her feather light touch. It only made her look forward to feeling the shiver run through her body when she brought Tina to the peak of sexual ecstasy. Bette continued, Im going to make love to you like I wanted to on that first dateslowly, repeatedly and all night long She placed her hand behind Tinas head and drew her face in to meet her own. Their lips were so close they were almost touching. Bette looked intently into Tinas eyes as she moved closer and took her bottom lip between her teeth, pinching the soft pink flesh, and tasting the heat of her lovers mouth. Tina felt herself tingle as the contact was finally consummated.

    She was done teasing. She reached for the bottom hem of Bettes top and practically tore it from her body, so intense was her desire. They were both nude from the waist up, hungrily kissing each other as they fumbled with their jeans, trying desperately to remove them quickly, knowing the sooner they could remove the offending garments, the more quickly satisfaction could be achieved. Bette leaned Tina back onto the bed and they both moved under the sheet. As they shifted their bodies to a comfortable position, Tina reached forward and ran her hand up Bettes inner thigh and over her wetness. She then brought her hand to her mouth and licked the moisture from her fingertips as her eyes rolled back and a sigh escaped her.

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    2. loved it! im more of a alice and dana fan more than a bette and tina fan, but i loved it. u should write one like that about alice and dana..lol. keep them comin. ur really talented

    4. Hey I’m honoured. How was that for you;-) I think you’ll find it great for me and the rest of the gang. Wonderful – congratulations you are not now a sex scene virgin! I’d never have known it was your first time;-) Remember practice makes perfect!

    7. although i enjoyed the other version of this chapter…I REALLY REALLY enjoyed the revision of this chapter. I loved these lines…”Just give me a minute,” Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

      “We have the rest of our lives, T…” Bette responded.”

      Beautiful…i can’t wait until you post your next chapter…hopefully tina will return the pleasure to bette.

    9. That was a satisfying scene of eroticism between two women in love. Like the scene in ep 9 of the show, I could feel their regard for each other through the passion.
      Thanks for editing.
      And I signed up for the Paypal option the first week. I only say this to encourage others to do so. It’s important to support the sites that support us. Thank you.

    13. you’re the first writer in a long time to make me run the gamut of emotions i’m going through right now. with a complete absence of a girlfriend, saying i’m a little frustrated would be the understatement of the century. now i’m a little more frustrated, but in the good, noatalgic, i-just-put-myself-in-that-situation kind of frustrated. your writing is truly a breath of fresh air. just what i needed. i was wondering…do you think you could beta read for me? you seem adept enough that you would catch the small things and correct them as needed. just email me if you’re interested. illuminati_goddess@hotmail.com
      you’ve earned my admiration as a fellow writer. thanks for giving us all the honor of reading your work.

    16. This is just so damn hot! Great revisement…I ended up doing the exact same thing. First time writer here myself, and I know the hesitation that comes along with the first “love scene” It seems I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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