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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2 – the NC 17 Version

    Story written on May 13, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53869
    Author Notes:

    the same story with more detail at the end. The day in Palm springs and B & T get some time to themselves.

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    Bette unlocked the room with a swipe of the key card and they both stepped inside.

    It was interesting to hear everyones stories today. I cant say I was surprised to hear Shanes was set at elementary school, Tina casually wandered into the room as she spoke.

    Your story was my favourite, Bette said as she placed her purse on the stand by the door.

    Do you remember our first real date? Tina inquired, curious as to whether or not the event held similar significance for Bette as it did for her.

    What kind of question is that? Bette was a bit offended. Of course I remember – Ive never been so nervous in my entire life

    YOU were nervous, imagine how I was feelingbesides, what did you have to be nervous about?

    Bette hesitated before she continued. She had fostered quite the reputation for being a hard *****, both in her career and in her personal life. But if she couldnt open up to Tina, whom could she open up to?

    Her heart won out over her head as she replied.

    I knew I was already falling in love with you, she began and then she quickly continued. I know it seems absurd, we barely knew each other and you had only just stopped seeing Eric, but every time I saw you, I felt butterflies in my stomach and I even felt light headed her rambling trailed off to silence.

    So from your description, it was either love or food poisoning, Tina smiled as she turned down the sheets on one side of the bed. Bette so rarely spoke with this intensity of emotion; she didnt really know how to respond.

    Bette quietly moved in behind Tina and wrapped her arms around her waist. She continued reminiscing about the night of their first real date as she molded her body to Tinas and talked with a low throaty voice into her ear.

    You looked amazing that night. But you looked amazing each time I saw you. I knew I was smitten, Bette gently swayed with Tina as she spoke of her memories. I didnt want to make you uncomfortable, so I really tried to take things slowlybut what I really wanted to do that night was this

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    2. loved it! im more of a alice and dana fan more than a bette and tina fan, but i loved it. u should write one like that about alice and dana..lol. keep them comin. ur really talented

    4. Hey I’m honoured. How was that for you;-) I think you’ll find it great for me and the rest of the gang. Wonderful – congratulations you are not now a sex scene virgin! I’d never have known it was your first time;-) Remember practice makes perfect!

    7. although i enjoyed the other version of this chapter…I REALLY REALLY enjoyed the revision of this chapter. I loved these lines…”Just give me a minute,” Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

      “We have the rest of our lives, T…” Bette responded.”

      Beautiful…i can’t wait until you post your next chapter…hopefully tina will return the pleasure to bette.

    9. That was a satisfying scene of eroticism between two women in love. Like the scene in ep 9 of the show, I could feel their regard for each other through the passion.
      Thanks for editing.
      And I signed up for the Paypal option the first week. I only say this to encourage others to do so. It’s important to support the sites that support us. Thank you.

    13. you’re the first writer in a long time to make me run the gamut of emotions i’m going through right now. with a complete absence of a girlfriend, saying i’m a little frustrated would be the understatement of the century. now i’m a little more frustrated, but in the good, noatalgic, i-just-put-myself-in-that-situation kind of frustrated. your writing is truly a breath of fresh air. just what i needed. i was wondering…do you think you could beta read for me? you seem adept enough that you would catch the small things and correct them as needed. just email me if you’re interested. illuminati_goddess@hotmail.com
      you’ve earned my admiration as a fellow writer. thanks for giving us all the honor of reading your work.

    16. This is just so damn hot! Great revisement…I ended up doing the exact same thing. First time writer here myself, and I know the hesitation that comes along with the first “love scene” It seems I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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