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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2 – the NC 17 Version

    Story written on May 13, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    the same story with more detail at the end. The day in Palm springs and B & T get some time to themselves.

    Oh my God Tina, I dont think you would have done that the night of our first date, Bette was so aroused at the sight of her wife tasting her, she could hardly bear it any longer. She reminded herself that she promised slow and deliberate love making, but Tina apparently had something a little more aggressive in mind. It was Bettes turn to try to regain control of the pace.

    She reached to the bedside stand where she had earlier placed the container of ice from the machine just outside their room. She pulled an ice cube from deep in the container where there were still some larger pieces to be found and rested it at the top of Tinas sternum.

    I see youve thought of another way to make me wet Tina smiled at Bette as she felt her move the ice towards her right breast. She circled the outline of the breast, gradually making that circle smaller as she approached the already aroused nipple. Finally Bette allowed the ice to graze a contact over the top of the erect and sensitive flesh. Droplets of water melted and ran down the side of Tinas body to soak into the sheet. Bette leaned in and took the ice cube in her mouth, alternating between letting the ice rest on Tinas nipple and letting her mouth suck and bite at the result of her efforts. She pulled the ice back into her mouth and moved to Tinas left breast, repeating what she had done initially.

    As she felt Tinas legs part she moved to rest her body between them, rotating her hips in time with Tinas movements as the last of the ice melted with the heat of her mouth and Tinas body. Bette lifted her head from Tinas breast and looked into her eyes as they found a rhythm together. Bette paused and reached down to retrieve a taste of her lovers juices. She brought her hand up to Tinas lips and watched as Tina protruded her tongue tentatively from her mouth to taste herself on Bettes fingertips. Bette moved forward to taste Tinas on her own fingers and on Tinas tongue. They soon found themselves devouring each other, unable to satiate their desire. Tina tried to lift herself from the bed to get closer to Bette, but couldnt find the strength.

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    2. loved it! im more of a alice and dana fan more than a bette and tina fan, but i loved it. u should write one like that about alice and dana..lol. keep them comin. ur really talented

    4. Hey I’m honoured. How was that for you;-) I think you’ll find it great for me and the rest of the gang. Wonderful – congratulations you are not now a sex scene virgin! I’d never have known it was your first time;-) Remember practice makes perfect!

    7. although i enjoyed the other version of this chapter…I REALLY REALLY enjoyed the revision of this chapter. I loved these lines…”Just give me a minute,” Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

      “We have the rest of our lives, T…” Bette responded.”

      Beautiful…i can’t wait until you post your next chapter…hopefully tina will return the pleasure to bette.

    9. That was a satisfying scene of eroticism between two women in love. Like the scene in ep 9 of the show, I could feel their regard for each other through the passion.
      Thanks for editing.
      And I signed up for the Paypal option the first week. I only say this to encourage others to do so. It’s important to support the sites that support us. Thank you.

    13. you’re the first writer in a long time to make me run the gamut of emotions i’m going through right now. with a complete absence of a girlfriend, saying i’m a little frustrated would be the understatement of the century. now i’m a little more frustrated, but in the good, noatalgic, i-just-put-myself-in-that-situation kind of frustrated. your writing is truly a breath of fresh air. just what i needed. i was wondering…do you think you could beta read for me? you seem adept enough that you would catch the small things and correct them as needed. just email me if you’re interested. illuminati_goddess@hotmail.com
      you’ve earned my admiration as a fellow writer. thanks for giving us all the honor of reading your work.

    16. This is just so damn hot! Great revisement…I ended up doing the exact same thing. First time writer here myself, and I know the hesitation that comes along with the first “love scene” It seems I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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