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    Palm Spring Break Chapter 2 – the NC 17 Version

    Story written on May 13, 2005 by justkeepswimming.
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    Author Notes:

    the same story with more detail at the end. The day in Palm springs and B & T get some time to themselves.

    Tina felt Bettes mouth leave her own and start moving down her body. A trail of kisses left her skin aching for more. Each contact drew her in further, desperate for the touch of Bettes mouth. Tina felt Bettes hand moving up her inner thigh, much like earlier in the afternoon, but this time she had no intention of stopping her progress. She tried to push her body further south to quicken the pace at which Bettes hand reached its destination.

    Bette was still intent on moving slowly, prolonging the pleasure she brought to Tinas body, but she felt Tinas movement and knew she longed for her touch. She wanted to hear Tina verbalize her desire. She spoke as her tongue circled Tinas navel and the fingers of her right hand teased the wet curls at her center.

    Tell me what you want me to do for you, Tina, Bette breathed deeply of the scent that was emanating from her lover.

    I want to feel your tongue inside me, moaned Tina.

    Tinas directive encouraged Bette lower. She dragged Tina over so they were diagonal on the bed, her head between Tinas legs looking up trying to catch Tinas gaze. Tinas head was thrown back in anticipation until she realized Bette had stopped. She looked up to meet her eyes. Her desire was communicated with one simple word.

    Please.

    Bette once again focused on her loves inner thigh, lapping up the moisture that had accumulated from their interaction. She alternated back and forth between the right and left thigh, kissing, licking and lightly biting at Tinas tender skin. She once again felt Tina trying to capture the contact of Bettes mouth closer to her *****, but Bette wanted to hear Tina tell her what she wanted as she made love to her.

    Youll get whatever you ask for Bette stated in a sultry tone, continuing her assault on Tinas legs, only rarely brushing up against the now soaked curls that concealed the gift yet to be opened.

    Use your fingers to spread my lips apart, Tina started. Bette did as she was told and then pursed her lips together and blew directly onto Tinas *****.

    Oh *****, Bette, you can do that for a while, GOD Tina exclaimed. She tried to push her center up to Bettes face begging for contact.
    Use your tongue on my *****, I need to feel you suck on it. Tina was almost at her wits end hoping Bette would just stop asking for direction and ***** her.

    Bette decided she had held out long enough. She made her tongue firm and dipped it inside her lover, curling it once inside to draw out more of her juices. She then dragged her tongue from Tinas entrance and moved up over her lips to the tip of her ***** where, at the very end, she twirled her tongue in a circle, sending jolts of passion through Tina as she progressed toward her inevitable climax. Bette adjusted herself without ever having her tongue lose contact with Tinas *****, so she could place first one finger, then two deep inside her wife. She was in awe of the sensation of the softness as Tina pressed down on her hand with more and more force.

    Tinas hips lifted from the surface of the bed as Bette continued circling her tongue over the delicate skin of her lovers most sensitive spot. Bette could feel Tinas hands on the back of her head as she continued her assault. Tinas breathing was labored and then started coming in quicker gasps as she approached the peak of desire. With one last bold move of Bettes tongue, she placed a third finger inside Tina and finally felt her fall over the edge into a mind numbing *****. When the spasms had settled from her body, Bette moved up to take Tina in her arms.

    Just give me a minute, Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

    We have the rest of our lives, T Bette responded.

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    2. loved it! im more of a alice and dana fan more than a bette and tina fan, but i loved it. u should write one like that about alice and dana..lol. keep them comin. ur really talented

    4. Hey I’m honoured. How was that for you;-) I think you’ll find it great for me and the rest of the gang. Wonderful – congratulations you are not now a sex scene virgin! I’d never have known it was your first time;-) Remember practice makes perfect!

    7. although i enjoyed the other version of this chapter…I REALLY REALLY enjoyed the revision of this chapter. I loved these lines…”Just give me a minute,” Tina said with her eyes closed, her chest rising and falling with each deep breath she needed to recover.

      “We have the rest of our lives, T…” Bette responded.”

      Beautiful…i can’t wait until you post your next chapter…hopefully tina will return the pleasure to bette.

    9. That was a satisfying scene of eroticism between two women in love. Like the scene in ep 9 of the show, I could feel their regard for each other through the passion.
      Thanks for editing.
      And I signed up for the Paypal option the first week. I only say this to encourage others to do so. It’s important to support the sites that support us. Thank you.

    13. you’re the first writer in a long time to make me run the gamut of emotions i’m going through right now. with a complete absence of a girlfriend, saying i’m a little frustrated would be the understatement of the century. now i’m a little more frustrated, but in the good, noatalgic, i-just-put-myself-in-that-situation kind of frustrated. your writing is truly a breath of fresh air. just what i needed. i was wondering…do you think you could beta read for me? you seem adept enough that you would catch the small things and correct them as needed. just email me if you’re interested. illuminati_goddess@hotmail.com
      you’ve earned my admiration as a fellow writer. thanks for giving us all the honor of reading your work.

    16. This is just so damn hot! Great revisement…I ended up doing the exact same thing. First time writer here myself, and I know the hesitation that comes along with the first “love scene” It seems I have a lot to learn from you. Thanks for the great chapter!!!

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