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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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She stopped inspecting her clothes and dropped her hands to her sides, scowling at me. “I can’t go anywhere without leaving a water trail after me thanks to that fucked up stunt you just pulled.”
“You are such a girl.” My eyes squinted at her in disbelief. “You’re not even wet.”
She couldn’t be convinced that she could move so it was simply ironic that by the time I devised another plan, there was no time left.
Helena must’ve been on her way to find us although she more than likely regretted her choice when her eyes landed on me. “Okay, I’m not even going to think about this.” She placed a hand to her forehead and closed her eyes, blocking out the view of me and Carmen. “The both of you, get upstairs and don’t come back down until your dry.” Her tone was uncharacteristically level.
I wavered. “Wait, just have someone get me a towel then I won’t have to walk across the carpet.”
“No, I don’t care anymore. Tonight can’t turn out any worse than it is now.” She waved her hand in dismissal to which I guiltily followed Carmen through the house and mentally counted the steps on the staircase with each and every step I took, feeling like a prisoner on death row.
“I hope you got Helena one helluva Christmas gift.” Carm stated when we reached the bathroom.
“Well, I got her a better present than an average bottle of champagne.”
She was taken back. “How did you know that’s what I got her?”
“I guessed.” I smiled in victory and opened the bathroom door, thinking that Slice and Dana had gone downstairs by now; I was wrong. “Oh my,” It was my turn to quote Alice from when she disturbed me and Carmen. “Did I almost interrupt something?”
Alice, positioned with her back resting against the wall as she sat on the floor, looked less than enthralled at my words while Dana , sitting next to her, looked at me in confusion. “What happened to you?” Dane pointed to my soaked clothes.
“What happened to you?” I redirected the question as I nodded towards Dana’s red, puffy eyes.
Neither of us chose to answer the other’s question and Carmen quickly grabbed a towel from the cabinet shelf before proceeding to push me out of the bathroom, mumbling an apology to Alice and Dana.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(