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Phobia (Chapter 6)
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She jogged through her memory. “Uta, Uta, Uta, oh the um- the vampire?”
“Yes, that one.” I was surprised that she remembered.
“Yeah, what about her?”
“Well, she kinda called me yesterday.”
And the confusion was back. “Why?”
“You know, that’s the funny part. She wanted to know if I was over Dana yet.”
Relief came across her face. “And you said ‘no’, right?”
I only wished I had the answer she was expecting. “Actually, I told her that I was-” I corrected myself, ignoring Shane’s disbelief. “am, over Dana.”
She looked away and mumbled. “I thought I hid your medication.” When she returned her eyes on mine, she spoke clearly. “Why would you lie like that?”
“Because I need a reason to stay in L.A. and if Dana can’t do that, then maybe Uta can.” It was hard for me to believe my own words.
“Al, I’ve given you as much advice as I can.” She placed a hand on my shoulder to make me listen. “Talk. To. Dana.” I stared at the ceiling not wanting to hear it. “Because if you get involved with someone else, it’s going to fall through and leave you worse off then you are now.” Thanks for the confidence, Shane. “You’re not ready for a relationship.”
“I’m-”
“And you’re not over Dana.”
It was useless to protest; She’d told me the truth over and over again, the problem was I didn’t want to hear it. “Merry fucking Christmas.”
I shrugged her hand off my shoulder and walked away, knowing that it wasn’t fair to take my dejection out on her; after all, I was the one who asked for it. But once again, I couldn’t take my words back.
I walked away on autopilot and toured through the mansion until the rest of the group was ready to play drinking games, something I was suddenly looking forward to.
I ventured through the hallway, up the staircase, glimpsed at various, framed pictures in the bedroom. But it didn’t take my mind off of what could happen in a week if my plans didn’t change. Finally, I set the last picture down on the dresser and shut off the bedroom light, figuring that maybe talking to Henry and Tina , however boring, would be a better solution. Yet as I passed the bathroom upstairs, I stopped when I heard a muffled sob. It could’ve been my imagination, but I had to be sure.
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Ok what is it with all the danish writer’s putting themselves down lately?! I’m telling you this is an awesome story and I love how you write it from 4 perspectives, its original and totally enthralling! Don’t doubt that. I really hope you don’t give up on this because I really will come over to your place and do some best friend talking to you! :P And awww for your so sweet comment, sadly yessum I have been rejected *sniffs* however thats a whole other story…or 5. Again awesome post and thanks! PPS :) xx
oooo and alice has dropped the bomb shell to dana…. wonder waht dana will do now.great chapter. love this story. love how it focuses on both sharmen and danish. i love it really do… can’t wait to read more – if more is by tomorrow;) post more soon..lol
Wow, I’ve finally caught up on all your updates, this is a fantastic fic and I love the different perspectives. And that things are not all simple between these ladies. I like that you had Lara have her own life and leave Dana, who was being an ass. And that Dana and Alice can still talk, no matter how hard it may be for them to get to that place. Excellent work, looking forward to reading more;) Please post soon!
I can’t wait to see how Dana reacts to Alice’s news
Alright, now i left you a message to further address you because if i wrote it all here we’ll it would take up a bit of space lol ANYHOW back to the story. Which has left me without any gracious words to say because you’ve heard them all and they all very much apply to this story but however i will try my best, it was FREAKINGAWESOMELOVELYFANTASTICBRILLIANTFUNNY yes that’s a word look it up… ok or it might just be 6 words…together. lol you’re good, you’re really good i really expected it to be DANA of course danish fool me it was UTA, which i was surprised and thought it was awesome. It really did want to make me cry (which by the way isn’t a bad thing, you write it so well, it’s actually a compliment, if ya made me cry lol) but yeah, me crying at the part with Dana in the bathroom, and then Alice and her having a lil chat, it was great. Now with Uta somewhat in the picture i wonder how that’s going to play out which i know you’ll fill us in on. Shane and Carmen, oh so cute and holy CRAP she still has the ring on? can’t wait for that part. Helena freaking out about little things was funny. Poor Helena she needs s1 in her life asap. and finally to end this which ended up being long anyhow you could never hurt me, it’s actually WAY the opposite so hush! and obviously PPS, yes it is a rather dire request :) x0x0x
hope you post more soon x
I only just found this story. I love it!! Any chance for a new chapter? Please??
ok awsome update but ahhhh the happy sharmen was torture , it was super funny but still those two are dancing around the inevitable again, please let them finaly figure it out i mean carmen still ahs the ring come on….shane wake up and go get her . thanx again you totaly came through , way to go, favorite author ever…
OMFG why u quick it??? i love it keep going pleaseeeeeeeeeeee…..pleaseeeee you’re killing me
And what happens next?…… Guess we’ll never find out :(