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“You’ve got me.”
Dana lent in to kiss the lips that she knew would feel like heaven, Alice lent away and sighed, resting her forehead against Dana’s.
“Please.”
Dana had whispered so softly that Alice had to strain to hear, but she had no problem feeling the hot breath on her lips making them tingle with want.
“I can’t.”
Dana nearly whimpered the closeness of Alice was driving her insane. Alice stepped away from the brunette and lent in slowly, she didn’t know what she was thinking, but she could deny Dana nothing. She gently pressed her lips against Dana’s relishing the smoothness of the other woman, Dana sighed into the kiss and tried to deepen it, but Alice was in control, she had broken her rule, but she was going to do it on her own terms. Whilst their lips were still locked together Alice reached up to Dana’s shirt and slowly undid the buttons letting it slid to the floor, she then worked her way around Dana’s back to rid her of her bra.
Alice pulled away from the kiss before she forgot herself and moved to Dana’s neck, kissing and nibbling she made her way down until she reached the hardening nipples and took then between her lips. Dana sighed and arched back trying to get as much contact as possible. Alice was kneeling on the floor as she licked at Dana’s nipples, as she was doing this her hands ran their way up Dana’s legs to the waist of her trousers. Alice’s nimble fingers quickly undid the buttons and let them drop to the floor along with Dana’s panties. Dana was stood in her living room completely naked with her hands running through Alice’s hair as the blonde continued her assault on her hard nipples. She felt Alice’s soft hands work their way up her legs and start to gently stroke the soft hair between her legs.
Alice was surprised at just how wet Dana was, she ran her fingers through the soft folds, she was slow and gentle, not wanting to rush this. Dana gasped and lent back as she felt the light pressure on her then Alice started to rub at Dana’s sensitive clit causing the brunette to moan and buckle. Alice stopped her exploration and stood up, Dana looked at her with confused and lust filled eyes.
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Wow. This is truly amazing. You better continue or I will have to track you down. And dissertations are overrated anyway. Seriously, though… Incredible start to the story. Poor Alice. I have a feeling Dana will track her down, though. I hope to see another post on this soon. Thanks, felix86!!
I can only second every word tht MaGoose has written above – Fabulous story which you must continue, as Dana has to find Alice again – please!!!
DANA HAS TO FIND HER AGAIN. CHASE AL DAMN IT. Dana should wake up. Be like where are you going.Sorry I get alittle excitied sometimes. I should be writing. I am being bad again. I am going to write. Felix I love this story. If it’s a one off i guess i can deal
Holy mother fuckin cow! Dana picking Alice up? I could never imagine that in all my years! DAMN! She is woman, make me roar! If you don’t keep this going, RIGHT NOW, then you don’t deserve to be called a Danish fan, let alone a Danish author. PLEASE POST SOON. I am begging you. Please.
HOLY SHIT!!! Oh my god… NOW that is what I call a real sexy scene!I’m so glad I got to read this one! Alice as a hooker and Dana fallen in love with Al at first sight? OMG…. I’m going nuttttsssss here. I’m actually way too much liking this. Man, it was super hot, and Dana, by George, go find Alice and make her her woman!! OKAY you HAVE GOT TO KEEP WRITING this one! But don’t make this too easy on Dana, I love antsy novel and all the drama ;) (hee hee I’m indeed evil) PPS
wow this is really great–such an interesting idea for a story, i totally love it. that, and dana is way hotter than richard gere :)
WOW this is good and hot, love it. Dana need to find Alice again. Please post more, thanks!
WOW!! I’m so intrigued by this story i’ve never read one with those circumstances. I like how there appears to be a huge backstory with Alice. Reli Reli clever interesting story being so completely hot yet romantic at the same time reli hope u continue with this or i will be upset!! lol PPS x x
OMFG!!!! AWESOME!!!DANA BETTER DAMN WELL FIND HER AGAIN! That was amazing, and def one of a kind. Cant wait to see where this could develop! Keep it up, truly an outstanding job!!! PPS!
I am with everyone else on this. Please continue. This story is fantastic!! Please let Dana go after her. Those two belong together! Please post soon
Another great story from you. I love ‘Recovery’ and can’t wait to see where you take this one. I think you’d better continue or you’ll have a whole lot of disappointed Danish fans tracking you down hahaha. Really, it was great. PPS? :) Pretty please??
I just had to comment on this amazing story; it is fantastic. I love how you started it. Dane soooo needs to wake up lol. PPS
I agree with everyone else, this is fantastic. Looks like there will be this huge army of angry Danish fans chasing after you if you don’t continue with this, lol. But I don’t think Dana should find Alice right away, a little tension and drama is good for the story. Can’t wait for more. Thank you!!!
wow!! very interesting story. i like it alot hope theres more. :)
Fantastic start Dana has to find Alice there soul mates. Do your dissertation though carnt get this far and not do a good job of that, just take a couple of breaks now and then and post for us.
that was so hottt! please please please continue!! its kind of like pretty woman but not if ya no what i mean!lol i love it and if u dont continue u will have a lot of explaining to do by the looks of it! pps
*starts breathing again* OMG, I loved it. I had never thought that I would be liking this alternate universe for these two (I mean, Alice as a prostitute).
damn girl. Continue please… cos I’m with Magoose, you don’t want us o track you down do you? lol kidding, very good start though, thanks :D
I loved it!!!!! Please continue when u get a chance!! PPS
That story was really amazing hot and it would be very lovely with a second part.
Great story. Can’t wait for Dana to run after Alice to patrol the dark alleyways waiting for any glimpse of Alice. I do have one comment, you allude to Dana as dorky but then you don’t detail anything dorky about her. That would be nice if a little of the “dorky” Dana was described. Other than that, great job.