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Pieces of Time, Chapter XIV
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“We’ve been down this road so many times, T.” My body stops and I grip her waist to spin her around.
“You’ve said this yourself.” I speak again.
She nods. “I know.” she smiles at me.
“Let’s just enjoy this trip together as a family even if we aren’t together.”
“Can I ask you just one question?”
I look at her. “Of course.”
“Do you truly love Rachel?”
—
“So where are you from?”
I smile before I answer. “I’m from LA.”
“What are you doing here?”
“I came with a few friends.”
“Are they here?”
“A couple of them.”
“Was one of them that girl you were sitting with?”
“Yes, that would be one of them.” I respond. “So what about you? Where are you from?”
“I’m actually about 304 miles from LA, I live in San Jose. But I’m hardly ever there.” She chuckles. “Is your friend coming back?”
“She should be.” I respond. “Thanks for this drink by the way.”
“How couldn’t I buy a beautiful girl like you, a drink?”
I smile.
“My name is Lisa.”
“I’m Rachel.”
—
“Rachel kinda has stolen my heart.”
“Meaning “yes” you do love her.”
“I have started to fall in love with her.” I speak gently. “I never thought I’d find someone, but Rachel has been amazing to me.”
“Then don’t mess this up, Bette.”
“How about Danielle? How have you guys been?”
“I don’t know.”
“You don’t know?”
“I really don’t.”
“Did you wanna talk to me about it?”
I look over at Bette as we finally make our way outside. I ponder my decision whether or not to tell her about Danielle’s business offer.
“I think this is something we have to figure out ourselves.” I respond.
—
“Let’s dance.” She says reaching out and touch my arm.
“I’ll probably stumble into someone.”
“I got you.” She winks at me.
“Fine.” I say standing to my feet.
As I turn I see a drunk Shane walking towards me.
“What are you doing?” She says chuckling. “Who may this be?”
“I’m Lisa.” She says holding out her hand.
I watch as Shane shakes her hand.
“Did you wanna dance with us?”
“Nah, I don’t dance unless I’m high or at least drunker than what I tend to be now.”
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Wow, should be interesting. PPS. Thanks
Fantastic to see a update, I didn’t forgot this story, it is amazing and i miss it.
Life can be a pain in the ass, but again i truly appreciate that you found the time to update.
Rachel, how stupid and mean she is, instead of talking to Bette about her feelings she decides on purpose to step out and seek for a lay. It is good that Shane stopped it, but she should have done that before they ripped each others clothes of.
I feel so sorry for Bette, she loves her, not that Rachel is the love of her life, but she fell for her.
But i am a true Tibetter, so bye Rachel and Danielle.
Tina should Bette tell about Danielle job offer and the possibility of moving.
Waiting patiently for the next update!
Ok so I see you have school and that it’s been over a year now…hope your holidays were great..but I need more..can’t stop there…love your story please come back.
My life has been so busy for the past year and i feel terrible for not continuing, I have continued to write I just haven’t made any updated posts. Please forgive me from the deepest of apologies. I need to continue.
ok I won’t push I just really like this story.
Ok so can you make it a New Year Resolution to continue this story, please.
It is 14 months since this last post and we really do need for you to complete the story so please come back and post soon.
My life has been so busy for the past year and i feel terrible for not continuing, I have continued to write I just haven’t made any updated posts. Please forgive me from the deepest of apologies. I need to continue.
OK I forgive you but request that you please make updated posts soon, please!
SG