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Pieces of Time, Chapter XIV
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“You know I have some E, if you wanna hit?”
“Yes.” I blurt out.
“Rachel, are you sure? Have you done this kind of shit before?”
“Once, in college.”
“Then follow me.” Lisa says with a smile as she leads us towards the washroom.
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“God, it is such a beautiful night out.” I say looking over at Bette as we walk along the beach.
“Remember our trip to Hawaii?” She asks me.
“We stayed up all night waiting for the sun to set and by the time it set, we fell asleep and missed it.” I chuckle.
“We were so excited because everyone told us how beautiful it is.” I watch her smile.
“We should have had coffee instead of wine.” I laugh.
“That was our failure.” She chuckles.
“More like our fault.” I laugh again.
“We all know who loves wine more..” She gives me the look of truth.
“Shut up.” I laugh. “Fine, it was my fault.”
“I think the kids are really enjoying there first tropical vacation trip.” She says to me.
“Cole hasn’t stopped building sand castles.” I tend to chuckle again.
“I swear that boy could turn the entire beach into a land of sand castles.” Bette smiles wide. “Have you gotten any texts from anyone?” She then asks me.
“Nope.”
“Everyone must be wasted out of their minds.”
“More than likely Alice is feeding everyone shots after shots.” I add.
“I miss other decisions to just stay home together. I loved that about us.” I smile.
“Yeah, we were always the party downers.”
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My legs feel like they are floating as I move my body on the dance floor. My mind blurry and the music surrounding my only hearing. My body grinds against Lisa and Shane. I feel that I am letting myself go.
I look around to the room becoming this orb of light.
Time passes and I feel myself to slow down a little.
“Ready to go?” Shane stumbles to ask me while she fills with chuckles to herself.
I nod.
“Hold up.” Lisa says. “Where are you guys going?”
“We are heading out man.” Shane says leading me with her.
“Already?”
“Sorry, Lisa.” I manage to focus.
Shane and I stumble out of the club and slowly manage to focus enough to make it back to the hotel hallway.
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Wow, should be interesting. PPS. Thanks
Fantastic to see a update, I didn’t forgot this story, it is amazing and i miss it.
Life can be a pain in the ass, but again i truly appreciate that you found the time to update.
Rachel, how stupid and mean she is, instead of talking to Bette about her feelings she decides on purpose to step out and seek for a lay. It is good that Shane stopped it, but she should have done that before they ripped each others clothes of.
I feel so sorry for Bette, she loves her, not that Rachel is the love of her life, but she fell for her.
But i am a true Tibetter, so bye Rachel and Danielle.
Tina should Bette tell about Danielle job offer and the possibility of moving.
Waiting patiently for the next update!
Ok so I see you have school and that it’s been over a year now…hope your holidays were great..but I need more..can’t stop there…love your story please come back.
My life has been so busy for the past year and i feel terrible for not continuing, I have continued to write I just haven’t made any updated posts. Please forgive me from the deepest of apologies. I need to continue.
ok I won’t push I just really like this story.
Ok so can you make it a New Year Resolution to continue this story, please.
It is 14 months since this last post and we really do need for you to complete the story so please come back and post soon.
My life has been so busy for the past year and i feel terrible for not continuing, I have continued to write I just haven’t made any updated posts. Please forgive me from the deepest of apologies. I need to continue.
OK I forgive you but request that you please make updated posts soon, please!
SG