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    Pyromance 4

    Story written on July 5, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Twisted secret lives, the way you bat your eyes…..

     

     

     

    “Hey Carmen…Shecter is out….she isn’t directing the movie any more…”

     

     

    “Wow…..who directing it?”

     

     

     

    “Some music video director her name is Alice…….Pieszecki….”

     

     

     

    “Never heard of her….”

     

     

     

    She didn’t seem concerned and looked a little miffed that I was saying anything to her at all. What the hell did this mean for me?”

     

     

     

    “Don’t worry Shane…director’s change all the time….all part of the business….” Bruce said. He went back to reading his book….

     

     

     

    “Yeah Shane…don’t stress it till it needs to be stressed……” Carmen added sharply. Acidic. I deserved that. I didn’t give her a chance to say what she really felt. I was afraid of what she was going to say.

     

     

    The city returned.

     

     

    The waves of heat floating up from the concrete jungle that is downtown Los Angeles. Bruce said his goodbyes and apologized for not being able to finish the ride with us. He had some pressing matters to attend to and the driver let him off on Peco…That left me and Carmen. Susnset was next and I didn’t want to not let her have her peace. The driver pulled up in front of my apartment then he got my got my bags and walked them up to my floor for me. It was nice and I gave him a ten. He tipped his cap and I motioned for him to not hold the door open.

     

     

     

    “Carmen?”

     

     

    “Not here Shane…..the walls have ears…..its all part of the business….”

     

     

     

    So against better judgment I invited her up to my place. She accepted and had the driver take her and Bruce’s stuff back to her house in the hills. She followed me up the three flights of stairs that lead to my apartment. I opened my door to find my dad and mom watching my TV. It was not the most welcome thing to stumble on. Dana must have let them in…..

     

     

     

    “Oh…my baby….your home….Dana let us in…we couldn’t not be here for you….Wow you look amazing….what a tan….is true are you in a movie…who is your friend?” Mom her arms outstretched….I couldn’t breathe.

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    6. Ah, man pleaz come on and update like now!!! You’re leaving us hangin’ jus a lil bit toooooooooo long, lol. Whelp, you already know I’m in love with thiz chicka so . . . Yeah, like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only chicka =D

    7. So happy to see some Shane/Carmen fic. I like Bette and Tina but I’m ODing on all the BT fic at the mo, I welcome the change. Plus, Shane is my fav character by far and I like to see her play starring roles in fic, with or without Carmen, but with is better. Thanks for writing!

    9. ***** Oh, look at me. I’m a rebel, because I gave this story a rating anyway! Bwa-ha-ha! Anyway, I thought it was cool how Shane told Carmen that she asked a lot of personal questions, then Carmen apologized only to ask the same question again. I know it sounds lame, but I just love all the little gems in the story. From the things the characters say, to simply mentioning random things like Kevin Arnold or the “time to make the donuts.” It’s the details that really give all your stories a certain personality. I fricken love it. You know what? I’m gonna go nutty here and give it SIX fricken stars. ****** (Yeah, that’s right, I did that.) ;) Keep up the awesome work and don’t let the haters who hide behind ratings get your goat. Not worth it.

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