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Remember When
Kit- Come on sis we’re hungry. Let’s eat.
Shane- Yeah, forget him Bette, let’s go in.
The rest of the group made similar comments but Bette didn’t move. At this point the man started to talk again:
Man- Wow! Everyone looks so worried. They are looking out for you. I guess you haven’t fucked with any of their feelings. Do you just do that to girls who fall in love with you? Listen miss (looking at Tina) if I were you I would run away from Ms. Porter before she plays with you, fucks you and then throws you aside and moves to her new conquest or should I say her new victim, Ms. Porter?
The man stopped talking and watched the looks in Bette’s and Tina’s faces. Bette looked mad, really, really mad. On one hand Tina was mad at what he was saying and on the other she was scared of what he wanted by saying all of this. She was also scared of how Bette was going to react to what he was saying.
As if on cue Bette reacted by stepping really close to the man. At this action Tasha, Shane and Kit walked and stood with Tina leaving the rest of the group behind. After watching the reaction of the different girls the man spoke once again this time to the whole group:
Man- If you value your feelings, I would reconsider being friends with this bitch.
At this moment Bette could not restrain herself any longer and slapped the man right across his face. A loud gasp was heard as a reaction of the group behind Bette and the man.
Tina- Bette…come on let’s go. Baby, please let’s just go… Please!
Seeing that Bette wasn’t moving Tina stepped a little closer and pulling her arm she whispered in her ear:
Tina- Baby, please let’s just go home. Bette I’m scared, Babe let’s just leave and go home. Please Baby just forget about it and forget about him and let’s just go home!
Bette- It’s ok T. You’re right, let’s go home.
Man- Sure, listen to the little bitch, the little fuck toy, Ms. Porter. I bet she will be a great fuck now that you are so mad and worked up. And I bet that once you’re through with her you’ll just throw her aside and forget about her, but not before you’ve made her fall in love with you. After all isn’t that what you did to my sister……. See Ms. Porter I’m Anthony Lerner, Jodie’s brother.
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(37 votes, average: 3.65 out of 5)
I am so excited you brought this story back. I was hooked the first time you posted and was disappointed when it didn’t continue. You made my day. PPS
please continue
Yes! Great start and please continue.
Welcome back 😃 I remember this story. So excited to read where you’re taking us. Thank you ✊😉
so you already post this.. I dont know if I want to wait and see what happends or if I should go and read this in the previous posts …
Awesome beginning. I can’t wait to read more.
Holy hell I am hooked!..But desperately hoping that Bette will be ok
Happy to see this story back, Please continue. Thanks for posting.
Oh please Tell me Bette is not going to die
Wow thanks for posting this story again. I don’t read that many fan fictions and this is actually the first time that I’m reading this and the moment I finished the first chapter I couldn’t stop until I’m done with chapter nine. I loved the flash backs and the proposal was so sweet, romantic and simple yet oh so unique. But I really hope that you’ll finish this the second time around Janice. Will patiently wait for the next chappies so PPVS!
Im so happy to see this story back.. please finish it. PPS.
Glad you are back.PPS
I remember this! So glad you brought it back. I hope you will continue and bring Bette back even if she’s paralyzed. LOL
You know you take a risk with your writing I love it….but ermmm why is Bette dying in all your stories are you trying to break my heart? Lol love it though