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The look in Bette’s face was one of confusion, anger and pain all wrapped up. The look on Tina’s and the rest of the groups’ faces was almost the same. After all they all knew about the history between Bette and Jodie. The man used Bette’s reaction to speak again:
Man- You see Ms. Porter my sister fell in love with you. She suffered a lot after you cast her aside and didn’t want to fuck her anymore. As much as my family and I tried to help her forget about you, she didn’t care. She loved you so much that she didn’t care about anything else anymore. So I’m here to tell that thanks to you, my sister…she…… Jodie killed herself because of you. She put a bullet through her head because of you Ms. Porter. So I hope miss (looking at Tina) that for your sake and your safety you don’t fall for Ms. Porter’s games because at the end she WILL hurt you.
With that said the man turned around and started walking away from Bette, Tina and the rest of the group.
Bette was stunned, frozen in place, with her eyes closed and feeling different things at the same time. Anger, pain and guilt.
Knowing Bette as much as she did Tina started talking to her:
Tina- Bette are you ok? …..Baby talk to me. It wasn’t your fault Bette. I know you, so don’t start blaming yourself for this….. Bette?
Bette wasn’t talking, or moving, she didn’t even had her eyes open. The girls were also frozen in place after hearing the news about Jodie. They were looking towards Bette and Tina who was trying to get through to Bette. Suddenly their attention changed from their friends to the man who was walking back to where Bette and Tina were. Finally Bette opened her eyes when the man spoke again:
Man- Oh Ms. Porter I forgot one thing…
Tina- (angry) Leave her alone, leave us alone. Haven’t you done enough?! LEAVE!
Bette- (almost numb) T calm down……….What is it? (To the man)
Man- (smiling) Just this…
With that the man took out a gun and shot Bette 2 times. Bette felt the 2 shots and slowly she felt her body falling to the floor, but then felt hands catching her before she hit it.
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I am so excited you brought this story back. I was hooked the first time you posted and was disappointed when it didn’t continue. You made my day. PPS
please continue
Yes! Great start and please continue.
Welcome back 😃 I remember this story. So excited to read where you’re taking us. Thank you ✊😉
so you already post this.. I dont know if I want to wait and see what happends or if I should go and read this in the previous posts …
Awesome beginning. I can’t wait to read more.
Holy hell I am hooked!..But desperately hoping that Bette will be ok
Happy to see this story back, Please continue. Thanks for posting.
Oh please Tell me Bette is not going to die
Wow thanks for posting this story again. I don’t read that many fan fictions and this is actually the first time that I’m reading this and the moment I finished the first chapter I couldn’t stop until I’m done with chapter nine. I loved the flash backs and the proposal was so sweet, romantic and simple yet oh so unique. But I really hope that you’ll finish this the second time around Janice. Will patiently wait for the next chappies so PPVS!
Im so happy to see this story back.. please finish it. PPS.
Glad you are back.PPS
I remember this! So glad you brought it back. I hope you will continue and bring Bette back even if she’s paralyzed. LOL
You know you take a risk with your writing I love it….but ermmm why is Bette dying in all your stories are you trying to break my heart? Lol love it though