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    Story written on September 15, 2012 by JaniceMRM.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=79660
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    I started writing this story a while back but had to stop because… well because life got in the way but im hoping to give it and the other one i started a go agin if you tell me to and if you guys like it. thanks!
    Chapter 1 The beggining…

         Tina- BETTEEEEE!

         Man- By the way Ms. Porter say hi to Jodie when you die.

    After seeing the gun Tasha ran to Bette and Tina’s side just in time to catch Bette and slowly laid her on the floor where Tina sat down and put Bette’s head in her lap. The man tossed the gun to the floor and started laughing. Angus went to him and punched him so hard the man fell to the floor unconscious. Everyone ran to where Bette was. Dylan stood where she was calling 911. They all had tears on their faces, especially Kit who was on the floor besides her sister, Alice who was being supported by Tasha because she could not stand on her own two feet after what she saw and Shane who had a mixture of really deep pain for her friend and anger for her shooter reflecting on her face. Angus stood besides the shooter making sure he didn’t wake up before the police arrived, Carmen was hugging Shane from behind and Nikki was doing the same to Jenny, Helena felt herself getting sick so she walked back to where Dylan was and started crying hugging her. Bette was on the floor covered in blood and trying to talk:

         Bette- T… Tina….

         Tina- Shhhh, baby it’s ok, don’t talk. It’s going to be ok. You’re going to be fine, just hang in there. (Tina was crying and had Bette’s bloodied hand in hers squeezing it hard)

         Bette- I’m sor…..sorry!

         Kit- You don’t have to be sorry for anything baby sis, nothing was your fault. You just stay still and hang in there, help is coming. Baby sis don’t you dare give up on me now.

         Bette- It…it…it hurts

         Tina- (crying) I know baby, but help is on the way. Please don’t talk; you have to save your energy. Everything is going to be ok, you’ll see. Stay with me Bette… don’t… don’t close your eyes, look at me baby, just look at me, it’s going to be ok.

         Bette- Te…tell Angie……..that I lo…love her……so much.

         Tina- Don’t talk like that baby, you’re going to be ok and you’ll be able to tell her yourself how much you love her. Please just hang in there for me and don’t talk.

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    10. Wow thanks for posting this story again. I don’t read that many fan fictions and this is actually the first time that I’m reading this and the moment I finished the first chapter I couldn’t stop until I’m done with chapter nine. I loved the flash backs and the proposal was so sweet, romantic and simple yet oh so unique. But I really hope that you’ll finish this the second time around Janice. Will patiently wait for the next chappies so PPVS!

    14. You know you take a risk with your writing I love it….but ermmm why is Bette dying in all your stories are you trying to break my heart? Lol love it though

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