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    Story written on September 15, 2012 by JaniceMRM.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=79660
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    I started writing this story a while back but had to stop because… well because life got in the way but im hoping to give it and the other one i started a go agin if you tell me to and if you guys like it. thanks!
    Chapter 1 The beggining…

         Kit- (crying) Bette don’t make me kick your butt. You do what Tina says.

         Bette- (trying to laugh) Thanks Kit. I love….you. Take care of…my two gi……girls. Don’t le…leave them…alone.

         Tina- (Bette was closing her eyes so she yelled) BETTE… baby don’t talk like that, you’ll be ok. We will be ok, soon this will be just a nightmare… Baby look at me, BETTE look at me, don’t you dare die on me, you hear me.

         Bette- Tina… I love you…with all my…heart. I…I…I will always…be with…with you. I will…al…always love you and Angie.

         Tina- I love you too baby with all of me. BETTE… don’t close your eyes, baby just stay with me. Where the fuck are the EMT’s? Bette, baby, open your eyes, baby come on let me see those beautiful eyes…. (crying harder)Bette I love you, open your eyes baby…(as Bette opens her eyes) yes that’s it let me see those eyes that capture my soul. I love you so much. Don’t leave me. (Looking at Kit) Where are they Kit?

    Bette felt like she was in a tunnel. Everything was out of focus; she couldn’t even make out Tina’s form and almost couldn’t hear Tina calling her name and talking to her. She just wanted to close her eyes and sleep, just for a few minutes, maybe that way these strange feeling overtaking her body would pass.

    She just wanted to close her eyes and sleep, just for a few minutes, maybe that way these strange feeling overtaking her body would pass. Finally Bette closed her eyes. As she did that the sounds of the sirens could be heard in the background.

    Tina- (looking at the EMT’s soon approaching) Baby help is almost here. (Tina felt Bette’s grip on her hand loosening) Baby? (Tina saw Bette’s eyes closed) BETTE…BETTE…Open your eyes, please… BETTE. (She didn’t open her eyes and Tina felt the life drain out of her body) Bette I love you…please wake up…please. BETTE don’t you leave me, don’t you dare leave me and Angie here all alone. BETTEEEEEE….

    As Tina begins to cry harder than she already was, the paramedics start to work on Bette, removing her from Tina’s lap. Kit stands up taking Tina with her to give the paramedics more space to work with her sister. The whole group, the gang, Bette’s family, looks on as the paramedics begin to try to bring their friend, sister and lover back to life…back to them.

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    10. Wow thanks for posting this story again. I don’t read that many fan fictions and this is actually the first time that I’m reading this and the moment I finished the first chapter I couldn’t stop until I’m done with chapter nine. I loved the flash backs and the proposal was so sweet, romantic and simple yet oh so unique. But I really hope that you’ll finish this the second time around Janice. Will patiently wait for the next chappies so PPVS!

    14. You know you take a risk with your writing I love it….but ermmm why is Bette dying in all your stories are you trying to break my heart? Lol love it though

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