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“Well then. I came to get you for the round table discussion with the writers. Aaron is expecting you” he said dramatically, leaving her no wiggle room to escape this one. He smiled, teeth white and leaned in a little, his face closer.
She took a step back, “I have an hour or so Eric, I wanted to lie down before heading to the conference room and I want to call Bette” she said, watching as his jaw clenched at the sound of Bette’s name.
“I think we should get a drink instead…”
“No, thank you…”
“OK, why don’t I come in your room and we can prep for the writer’s meeting…”
“You are unbelievable. I am married, Eric. Happily. Very happily. Please stop.”
“I won’t take no for an answer, not this time. We have a lot to discuss…” he reached for her arm and Tina took another step back nervously when a voice interrupted them.
“Excuse me, miss?”
Unnoticed behind Eric stood a small woman, she was holding some towels and a small box in her hands. She looked expectedly at Tina, ignoring Eric completely. It was the woman from the plane, her hair had changed but Tina could still place her. Having her there gave Tina courage.
“Yes?” Tina quickly stepped around Eric, and the woman moved slightly, putting herself between Tina and Eric.
“I brought your things, as you requested…”
“I’ll take those inside for her, thank you…” Eric offered, stepping forward to reach for the box and towels. The woman swiftly moved the items away from his hands, smiling politely as she did so.
Tasha appeared from the elevator with a cart as she pretended to check a list, her eyes scanning the hallway as she made as much noise as she felt she could get away with.
“I will see you at the meeting, Eric” Tina’s tone was clearly dismissive and with the other two women in the hall, Eric had no choice but to give up. For now.
At that moment, Lara opened her door and greeted Tina as she stepped into the hallway. All three women went inside Tina’s now open room, leaving Eric alone outside the door. He hit his palm against the wall in frustration, his gesture not lost by Tasha. She decided she would follow him for a little while, see where he wandered off to.
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Good chapter….I like the way you explain Shane missing the plane. However, not a good idea for this group to get tipsy before they get on that plane for Chicago. I assume that it is a three or four hour flight from LA to Chicago and they all need all their senses and skills to protect Tina. Eric scares me and now that Jennifer is gone, Tina is down to Tasha and Lara. If Eric get violent, they can be easily be rendered helpless. Eric’s next move will be during or after the dinner. Bette and team will arrive too late to attend. or if they are fortunate just as they are leaving the venue to go back to their hotel rooms. This will be a crucial time for Tina and her safety. I hope they have a plan to cover this.
This is really tense, but I love how tender Bette and Tina are with each other…..But they need to stop drinking…sleep on the plane. Eat a good meal and prepare to do battle.
This story keeps me breathless with anticipation….cannot wait for another chapter….
Martha! Your question prompted me to goggle the flight from LA to Chicago and it said 4.5 hours so you are not far off in your assessment. Assuming Bette’s flight was around 11 with a four hour delay that would put her boarding at 3ish and landing 7:30 – BUT there is a two hour delay (ahead) for Chicago so that makes her landing at 9:30. Add in baggage time and ride to the hotel…. and well, it will be late. I love how you notice all the details and so appreciate you commenting and following!
Working on the next chapter now, my brain is trying on different scenarios…
BK,
I guess sometimes I get a little technical and literal in my analysis. I always put myself in the role of each of the characters to see if things at least make sense in reality. It always amazes me that people are able to make these long trips and have the energy to have major meetings and make major decisions with little or no rest. I find travel to be very tiring and it takes me a good sleep before I can start to function on a level which I feel comfortable with. But of course these characters are significantly younger and more fit than I am, so they do not have those kind of problems.
I am glad that you appreciate my comments – even if they are off the wall. But I am one who believes that the more feedback I can give as a reader, it will at least give you the writer a little different prospective as to what your story is being perceived. If this is meeting your expectations, then you are accomplishing your goal. But in the end, this is your story and you get to take it where ever you want to take it. I’m just here for the ride. I like your plots and your characters. I find that your description of their motivations and emotions and actions is really similar to how I perceive the characters to be. Your Bette and Tina make me feel comfortable and make me wish that they actually existed and were in my circle of friends. In a way, I guess they are.
Your stories are a real joy in my life and I hope you keep it up. Thank you for your responses.and your stories.
My dear Martha, I absolutely love your analysis – and I use that word on purpose because you really draw on the story and see the big picture. PLease please keep them coming! I am not a writer so I love that you and other readers help me keep on track and remember the details. I am a social worker and I am endlessly fascinating by behavior – what motivates people, why they do what they do – so this writing this has been so much fun and your comments – as well as others – add that extra layer of fun to the whole process.
This is a good example – I need Bette to arrive late in Chicago for the story to work And I need her tired and frustrated and on edge – so I love that you picked up on the drain such a journey takes. Personally, traveling wrecks me! Especially by plane. I need days to recover, lol. Anyway, please keep commenting and letting me know your thoughts – the good the bad the wonderful – it helps me write! Peace, happy Friday!!
BK
Tasha &Lara to rescue !!!
YES! For now… ;)
“This was a deeper love, this was what had been missing all along. This was a love that trusted, that did not seek to control or shape. That allowed the other to be, complicated and layered as they were.”
My, dear BK, I’m just beginning this very awaited chapter and these words are, for me, the perfect definition of true love – mutual trust and total acceptance of each other’s possible failures or emotional scars…
Unconditional love, period.
And that touches something so deeply personal in me, in this very complex part of myself and my past, so I thank you, as simply as that…
Now, I continue ! I cannot wait to find this despicable Eric and this so endearing thriller of yours *wink*
Therese, I love how you zone in on the most tender and character driven parts of this story. I loved this passage too…. I wrote and rewrote it several times trying to get the wording right. I so appreciate that you took notice and that you liked it too. I look forward to hearing what you think as the story continues to evolve… Thanks
Great chapter! But you have me feel very worried now with what will happen in the next chapter!
Tina is so naive. Alcohol is the main component in associate sexual assaults. Eric is a psychopath with evil intent for her. He feels like she is his subject to abuse. No drinking, no meetings, no where with public support. Lock her herself in the room with Lara and wait for Bette. Everyone gets ill when they travel. Call and stay put. After saying all that, she his disappeared , Bette is on the pursuit and drama has shown her face. Please keep her safe, BK! Tina would never recover from the type of assault Eric plans for her and Bette will feel responsible. No woman deserves that kind of trauma. (Please remind others if there are trigger moments in your next post.)
Magic you are so right. Thank you for the reminder about the trigger warning especially. I agree that alcohol is the main component in associate sexual assaults. And that Tina is so very naive. Appreciate you commenting and reading. Part of me is ready for this part of their story to be over, I find Eric very difficult to write. Peace and happy saturday….
BK, thanks for this chapter. I’m late with comments but I’m still catching up after a busy week.
The beginning was very sweet. Balm for the heart. It’s amazing how you always find different words to picture their lovemaking, make it even more intense, more intimate, more emotional. Love it.
The plot thickens. I hope Tina listens to Jennifer. It was more than careless to resort to alcohol to calm her nerves. She should instruct Lara to cut her off alcohol while in chicago.
The same goes for Bette as well. She was so adamant about it when she told Tina to avoid it while around Eric. How could she forget about her own “rule”? Why being so irresponsible? It doesn’t look like she takes the danger Tina is in very serious herself.
Martha is right about getting tipsy. The flight might be too short to be sober again. Even if the liver will break down the alcohol with maybe 0.1 permille per hour, Bette sounds like she drank a lot. The same goes for Alice and Shane. Didn’t they talk with Lucy? They know what Eric is capable of.
Tina will probably have to face Eric on her own. I fear for her safety. On the other hand it could be important for her self-confidence if she’d be able to defend herself successfully against Eric on her own.
BK, waiting for the next part is really trying my patience. We can’t leave Tina all alone for a week! ;-)
Maybe I start re-reading the story for the second time to bridge the time to your next posting.
I just love your story!