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Remember who you are 7
“Are you two ready or do we need to give you ten minutes?” Alice asked, peeking inside the cooler and taking out a cold beer. Opening it in one easy move, she handed it to Shane and was reaching back in to get one for herself when Bette walked back in.
Dressed in a semitransparent coverup and with her hair up, Tina thought Bette looked beautiful. “I would need longer than ten minutes alone with Tina to satisfy what I’m feeling right now, but we should go… the beach is waiting” she said, kissing Tina’s bare shoulder and walking out the door to the car. Tina’s eyes followed her.
“You cannot ever break up with her again, ever. Seeing her so happy gives me hope for the rest of us…” Shane said seriously, taking a big gulp of her beer and grabbing a bag to follow Bette.
It was an absolutely perfect day at the beach. Not too crowded and the afternoon sun hot and welcoming, the ocean blue and a peaceful backdrop to their gathering. Carmen and Dana were waiting with umbrellas and chairs set up for those who wanted them and before long Lara joined the group. Elena and Lara rushed off to paddle board while Tina and Dana hit a volleyball back and forth. Bette and Carmen elected to sit on the chairs, reclining enough to be comfortable while talking to Shane about her business. Alice bustled around getting drinks for everyone and set her towel up to lay on her stomach and get the music going. A small group of women walked by and gave Shane a once over, one turning around to walk backwards and held her hand up in the universal sign of “call me”. The woman next to her giggled and winked at Shane, blowing her a kiss.
Bette blew out an exasperated sound, “could they have been more obvious? And with you sitting right here!” she said to Carmen. She looked back and forth between Carmen and Shane, incredulous.
“It’s all good… Shane knows what happens if she jumps on that…don’t you Baby?” Carmen purred, leaning over to kiss Shane passionately.
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What a marvelous surorise : a new chapter of your so delightful, deeply endearing story I love so much !!
Oh, I was there, savouring all your last chapters with the same joy – simply, I wasn’t there enough, emotionally, to be able to comment….
Let just say I’m suffering of a relapse of this strange invisible illness called depression – c’est la vie, n’est-ce pas ?
But nothing will keep me far of your so precious story, my dear talented author,,,
Thank you SO much for this medication :-)
A,
So very glad you liked it! And glad you feel strong enough today to comment. I struggle with Depression as well as it’s good friend Anxiety. They often come hand in hand to disrupt my day. So I hear you. Message me if you need to talk. This story helps me cope with the strange tidbits being offered in the trailers where it appears Bette is without her other half…
Your Bette and Tina are so wonderful. This is love and the bonding of a maturing couple who have had their troubles but have found the secret to happiness – communication, and sharing of their lives, their fears, their emotions and their bodies. I just want to see that with every revelation of Bette’s history, Bette does not question even to herself that Tina will leave her. So unless Bette does something to break the trust they have in each other, Tina will remain by her side. At this point, its hard for me to see Bette or Tina doing anything which they know would hurt the other. At least anything like cheating or lying or being deceptive. I think they would sooner die first. The cost would be to great. Bette and Tina forever…
Thank you Martha. I have decided to write this Bette as the couple I always hoped they became, deeply flawed and needing to work together but committed to the relationship. Challenges will come their way but they will deal with them together. Thank you for commenting and reading…
Excellent! Beautiful! Thanks
Hi BK,
What a way to escape in the past with our favourite couple!!!
I mentioned it before, but i am really in love with your story!!! This version of Tibette warms my heart, you show us clearly their love for each other! They have matured and it is great to see Bette open up about her past with Tina without being scared anymore that Tina will leave her!
It was a fun, sexy and relaxing day for them at the beach, together with their friends.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Thank you for reading and for consistently commenting. I thought they needed some fun after the break through with Bette’s story last chapter. :)
Your story is making me forget about the horrible trailers. It is wonderful seeing Bette and Tina communicate at all levels. They have matured so much and know what their weaknesses are and are determined to work together to fix them. The lovemaking in the ocean was passionate and intimate and convey the deep love they have for each other.
Yes, JS. I have watched the trailers many times and I am not sure I can watch a Bette where Tina is gone. Is she dead? Moved on? Out of the country? In prison? None of these are acceptable. Horrible is a good word to describe it. I dont read forums to see what other fans are saying but it seems like this will cause some backlash?? Glad you like the story…
Loving this!
Please post soon this Bette and Tina I love!
SG
They’re so sweet and in love !
Love your story.