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“What? Who?” Shane appeared undone by the kiss which had all four laughing. Carmen went back for seconds.
Bette glanced over to watch Tina volley the ball with Dana. She was wearing a pair of black skimpy boy shorts over her bikini bottoms and her flat stomach rippled as she played. Bette was enjoying the view. It wasn’t legal to have a body like that. If anything, it was better than it was when they first met – and it was incredible then. But now. Now, Tina’s legs were toned and muscular from all the running she was doing, and a sheen of sweat had formed on her chest and shoulders. Her bikini top was ambitiously trying to hang on, not really made for playing volleyball. Her breasts looked fabulous as they bounced and moved with the motion of the game. Her arms were sleek and agile and her footing quick.
She had always been an athlete and had played many sports in high school, including volleyball. She was keeping up with Dana who was in great shape from playing pro tennis and even though Dana had never played competitive volleyball, her tennis training made her more than an even match.
They had been playing for over an hour and they were challenging each other with increasingly harder return shots. They kept the volley going, attracting a small crowd of high school boys who added to the excitement with their enthusiastic hollering and cheering. Back and forth the ball went, Dana diving at one point to get the ball back in the air and Tina sending a soft set back to her, giving her time to get back on her feet. Each time the ball was returned, the crowd would cheer their approval, adding to the fun.
Tina was absorbed in the game and not paying much attention to the crowd, so she looked up in surprise at the reaction from the crowd to Dana’s dive. Playing to her audience, Tina juggled the ball with her feet for a minute then sent it hard back towards Dana and it was game on. The boys continued to cheer, enjoying the sight of two beautiful women sweating and showing off their athleticism. It was all good-natured fun. Back and forth the ball went, both women keeping the ball in the air as they volleyed and jockeyed in the sand.
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What a marvelous surorise : a new chapter of your so delightful, deeply endearing story I love so much !!
Oh, I was there, savouring all your last chapters with the same joy – simply, I wasn’t there enough, emotionally, to be able to comment….
Let just say I’m suffering of a relapse of this strange invisible illness called depression – c’est la vie, n’est-ce pas ?
But nothing will keep me far of your so precious story, my dear talented author,,,
Thank you SO much for this medication :-)
A,
So very glad you liked it! And glad you feel strong enough today to comment. I struggle with Depression as well as it’s good friend Anxiety. They often come hand in hand to disrupt my day. So I hear you. Message me if you need to talk. This story helps me cope with the strange tidbits being offered in the trailers where it appears Bette is without her other half…
Your Bette and Tina are so wonderful. This is love and the bonding of a maturing couple who have had their troubles but have found the secret to happiness – communication, and sharing of their lives, their fears, their emotions and their bodies. I just want to see that with every revelation of Bette’s history, Bette does not question even to herself that Tina will leave her. So unless Bette does something to break the trust they have in each other, Tina will remain by her side. At this point, its hard for me to see Bette or Tina doing anything which they know would hurt the other. At least anything like cheating or lying or being deceptive. I think they would sooner die first. The cost would be to great. Bette and Tina forever…
Thank you Martha. I have decided to write this Bette as the couple I always hoped they became, deeply flawed and needing to work together but committed to the relationship. Challenges will come their way but they will deal with them together. Thank you for commenting and reading…
Excellent! Beautiful! Thanks
Hi BK,
What a way to escape in the past with our favourite couple!!!
I mentioned it before, but i am really in love with your story!!! This version of Tibette warms my heart, you show us clearly their love for each other! They have matured and it is great to see Bette open up about her past with Tina without being scared anymore that Tina will leave her!
It was a fun, sexy and relaxing day for them at the beach, together with their friends.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Thank you for reading and for consistently commenting. I thought they needed some fun after the break through with Bette’s story last chapter. :)
Your story is making me forget about the horrible trailers. It is wonderful seeing Bette and Tina communicate at all levels. They have matured so much and know what their weaknesses are and are determined to work together to fix them. The lovemaking in the ocean was passionate and intimate and convey the deep love they have for each other.
Yes, JS. I have watched the trailers many times and I am not sure I can watch a Bette where Tina is gone. Is she dead? Moved on? Out of the country? In prison? None of these are acceptable. Horrible is a good word to describe it. I dont read forums to see what other fans are saying but it seems like this will cause some backlash?? Glad you like the story…
Loving this!
Please post soon this Bette and Tina I love!
SG
They’re so sweet and in love !
Love your story.