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    Riders Ch.5

     

    Plus I was a bit afraid because anyone who tried to talk to, or went within ten yards of Tina was having a new one ripped for their effort. So all in all I was glad I was finished so I could escape before she saw me.

     

    So anyway I am walking along the corridor and I bump into Dana outside Bette’s room just in time to hear Bette tell her to wait. So as we stand there and wait, I will admit I got a bit caught up in the Kiss Dana planted on me. The next thing I know we hear an almighty crash coming from inside the room and then nothing.

     

    “Hey, Hey Bette you ok in there? Come on open up.”

     

    I could hear the slight nervous edge in Dana’s voice as she spoke through the door. We waited a minute or two and got no response.

     

    “PORTER, COME THE FUCK ON THIS ISN’T FUNNY. OPEN THE GOD DAMN DOOR.”

     

    I was yelling I know but by this point I had surpassed Dana’s nervousness and moved onto outright panic. Luckily all the noise had drawn the hotel manager to come and see what the problem was. After we managed to get him to understand our dodgy German he agreed to let us into the room with his master key.

     

    The scene that met me as the door opened caused my body to try and laugh and cry at the same time and in doing so forced some kind of strange cat scream like sound from my throat.

     

    Laying about five feet from the door with her feet tangled in a sheet was Bette. She was on her back next to what remained of the telephone table she had obviously demolished on the way down. The contents of the table scattered or smashed around where she lay. She was bleeding from a gash above her right eye and less severely from her nose. And I could see the dark shape of a bruise forming round the right side of her chin.

     

    Luckily Justin walked past and we sent him to find a doctor as we lifted Bette back onto the bed propping her head up so she didn’t swallow any blood. Then we seemed to run out of ideas and just stood waiting for the doctor and watching her like she was a lab experiment or something.

    Comments

    1. OMG I started cracking up from the moment Alice was singing “9 to 5” (which is on right now by the way lol) up to the cat scream and didn’t stop till the end. Actually, I could go for a fag myself right now.

    2. I agree you humor in this story is brillant and witty, and I was funny from start to finish. I just love. Keep Tina strong, and that is my last comment about the FILTHY and NASTY HABIT OF SMOKING!!!! Don’t mean to offend, it is just so unbecoming in a woman.

    3. I was definitely entertained by your chapter. How will everyone react once Bette’s feet touch down again? I hope you won’t keep us waiting too long. Thanks for writing!

    4. That was so funny,Guess Bette is the type that can’t that painkillers. Love this just keep on writing. Hope Bette doesn’t remember telling Tina she was falling in love with her. Love it thanks

    5. OMG what a hilarious post – I love it like I do your writing. Please post more often, because I’m addicted :o)) And Tina called Bette “babe”, I hope Bette can remember that later LOL.

    6. Oh god I REALLY LOVE this story! i love the way they all interact… I love the last sentence… I just love the whole thing… AND YEAH!!!! Bette is falling for Tina! :) LOL Thanks!

    7. LOL. I don’t think Bette’s going to remember anything and she probably hasn’t even admitted to herself that she’s falling for Tina. It’s going to be so fun for everyone to be around T & B for the next couple months NOT!

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