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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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Tina watched intently all the while, admiring the lean back, the strong shoulders, the long and graceful arms. She dared not to gaze a bit lower and only the thought of those perfectly buns made her breathing more difficult. Standing up, she fanned her burning cheeks with her hands.
Bette put on a set of robe and strolled out, keeping eye contact with the girl all the while. She let the robe hang loose around her shoulders. Across the room, her hand found the audio and pressed the opening button, lowering the volume to a comfortable extent. “Bed of roses”, the enhanced soft rock edition from the ‘This Left felt Right’ album, came up.
“’bout all of the things I still long to believe,
’bout love and the truth,
what you mean to me.
The truth is, baby you’re all that I need.”
“I love this song.” Bette’s voice was deep and soft, almost inaudible under the hoarse but sincere singing of Bon Jovi.
“I wanna lay you down in a bed of roses.
for tonight I sleep on a bed of nails.
I wanna be just as close as the Holy Ghost is.
And lay you down on a bed of roses.”
She stalked over and laid her hands on the blonde’s hips, looking down into the amber eyes. “I’d arrange a bed of roses for you, if only had I the chance…” She was interrupted by the fervent kiss on her lips. And she dropped the topic and shifted forward to the bed.
Tina felt the back of her knee against the material, and wrapped her arm around the brunette’s neck. She leaned back slowly to the mattress and pulled the tall girl along with her.
Bette’s robe fell apart around her chest as she laid on top the blonde and deepened the kiss. She discreetly stole her tongue out and nudged Tina’s lips, demanding entrance, and happily received the permit.
For a while, the blonde girl just enjoyed the attention paid to her lips and the hot tongue massaging hers. She would gladly melt in the radiating warmth of this loving brunette, this woman who loved her and did everything to please her and protect her. A throaty whimper escaped as she felt the large palm roaming at the opening of her robe, the warm long fingers tracing the sternum and slipping into the valley between her breasts. Taking in a breath of courage, she held the collar of Bette’s robe and peeled it off her shoulders and then her arms. The color of light mocha came into view more and more. She swallowed hard feeling the desirable muscles tense on the brunette’s upper arms as she cooperated in taking off the cloth.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot