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Savannah
Story written on February 15, 2012 by kins40.
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The room had fallen completely silent. The clinking noises of cutlery and glasses had stopped and all eyes and ears were on the beautiful brunette up above on the stage.
“And when you know them really well you can see them smile too when having fun or simply because they are happy, this happiness translating into raucous trumpeting at the birth of one of their own. In many ways, elephants surpass humans too; capable of communicating in voices we cannot hear and catching sounds and calls from far away. They will never forget either, their amazing memory spanning a lifetime, teaching them to shy away from threatening situations or repaying you equally in fairness and love.”
Bette and Tina’s eyes had locked at this precise moment and for a split second, the room around them vanished.
Soft brown eyes searched hazel ones and they were transported back in their hotel room, a few minutes before stepping out, en route to the gala venue.
Bette had been ready for while and stood in the living room of their hotel suite, patiently waiting for Tina to emerge from their bedroom.
Impeccably dressed in a simple but flattering black floor length evening gown, her hair flowing freely over her tanned bare shoulders, she was gazing out of the window of their lofty hotel room at the hustle and bustle of city life at street level.
The early summer’s evening of early July was still full of life with people toing and froing along the busy pavements and the toughened glass of her one way mirrored window still let through muffled traffic noises and sirens which characterised the incessant lifestyle of New Yorkers.
The soft click of the doorknob as it was turned had made Bette spin around and her point of focus immediately changed when her eyes fell on the vision which had crossed the threshold of the bedroom.
Tina stood there, radiant, in front of Bette smiling her gorgeous smile.
The vet had immediately taken a couple of steps forward, never lifting her eyes from the splendid woman, her hand outstretched beckoning Tina to come forward and take hold of it.
Not really knowing why, Tina had felt incredibly shy in her gaze. She had put her head down, momentarily self conscious in the most endearing way but Bette beckoned her again and Tina finally stepped forward as well until they finally stood toe to toe.
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Absolutely Brilliant! I will really miss this story, I sincerely hope you’re on with your next one ;)
Thanks so much for epilogue. Such a beautiful story.
truly amazing,,,,,,,,,,will be waiting impatiently!!!!!!!!! for whatever masterpiece you bring………..x
Thank you! Sad to see the end of this one.
You made my day, thanks. I loved it.
Your words touch my heart. Just beautiful.
K!!!!! Thank you so much for considering us as a priority! 😱 you are definitely one of my priories to read on this site. That epi was beautiful, as only can do. Thank you😃👍
Thank you just what I needed to read today. Absolutely awesomely brilliant :) Thank you for this wonderful story. I hope you give ua another soon !
I am blown away by your writing talent. Your words dance on the page. They paint images that rival an artist. Brava!
Kins..again..thank you so much for this incredible journey! You are truly an amazing gifted writer.Thank you for taking us on this beautiful trip!!
I was one of those silent readers who rarely commented, but I just wanted to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed this beautiful love story. Thank you so much for coming back with an epi. What an awesome story. Can’t wait for your next one. :) Please keep posting when you can.
What an unexpected treat – thank you, beautiful ending.
Truly Fantastic!!! Thank you so much for the epilogue. Your writing and the description of 42nd St. was simply fantastic. Does that really happen on 42nd street and how often. Does everything have to line up or the sun to be in just the right place for it to happen? Would love to see that. Thanks again for bringing us this story. Perfection!!! Thanks.
As always beautifully written and worth the wait. I pm you so hoping for a reply soon.
Beautiful, so beautiful. This story could be a novel it’s so good. Now I’m excited about that project ur working on for us! I can’t wait!
Excellent.Please continue writing(beg you).
Absolutely amazing! thank you from the bottom of my heart. Until your next story.
I’m glad that this post came to the light, it is brilliant so much romantic it can be a V-Day present and I will consider it one so thank u very much u made my whole V-week LOL ;DI hope we can see ur name again in new stories soon, wish u good luck with ur choices ;D thank u again very much!
Loved it! Can’t wait for your next story!
Superb! You are truely a gifted writer. Can’t wait for what you have in store for us next. Thanks!
Yes! You don’t dissapoint
Brava! Encore! ;-)
Wow! Thanks for the surprise!! :-) amazing chapter Kins!! ;-) And may I wish you good luck for your projects and wish that you’ll have time to share your next story (soon?!) :oDx
Utterly romantic…the ring is stunning and a perfect symbol of their love. Thank you for writing.
Wowww… Amazing epilogue! So beautiful… Gosh, that sunset sounds simply breathtaking! And the proposal was just magic. Way to go, Porter!!! Loved the little bit at the event and Bette’s speech. Exactly the kind of little “moments” in their new life together I was hoping to see. It was perfect! Sorry for not commenting earlier (I read it the day before yesterday late in the evening and was quite busy yesterday…). So glad and grateful that you granted us with an epilogue to this amazing story. As for your other projects, you know you have all my support in whatever you decide! Talk soon! xxx Kw
Oh joy & happy dance!!! Kins, thank you for the belated Valentine gift of Savannah. What a marvelous and satisfying conclusion to an equally marvelous and satisfying story (sigh). I’m simply amazed that you packed so much into four pages yet it never felt rushed, flowed well and completely drew me in at every turn. Your epi remind me yet again what a truly gifted writer you are and also made me realize how much I’d missed your writing. A few thoughts: 1 – Tina’s birthmark; did you make that tasty little detail up or is that from the extensive “research” you do for your stories???, and 2 – leave it to you to tease us about your unrevealed “future project” (you just can’t resist leaving us hanging can you ;). Looking forward to your return whenever that may be – whatever you have planned will no doubt be a treat. Cheers to you kiddo – iHH xxx
It all been said, but still worthy of praise. Wonderful, classy, and beautifully portrayed love story with a most intriguing backdrop. Thank you for always preserving the purity of TiBette’s physical love. Good luck with your future projects.
Beautiful and sweet
Absolute perfection dear friend. I could read you all day long. You have such a poetic way with words that always leaves me completely satisfied, yet wanting more. I guess I’m insatiable when it comes to your words. ;)
Great story from beginning to end very beautifully written with such detail…Enjoyed every bit of it. I love different beginning and this one was unique and creative. Thank you for sharing.
BnT.
I knew it was a good idea to come back to this story. Enjoyed it a lot!
You painted a beautiful picture of the Kenyan Sanvanah. Actually you made me think about going to Africa on vacation.
Amazing describtion of nature and wild life. It feels like I’m there when the plot is unfolding.
Very thorougly researched facts on veterinary medicine, the care of game and life in a game preserve.
Thanks for having Jodi as such an evil character. I didn’t like her in the series. Never understood what good that should do for Bette’s story line…
Alright, I think I’m going to start reading “epistolary affair” again :-)
Thank you for this great story.