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    Savannah

    Story written on February 15, 2012 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=78930
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    Epilogue

    "Tourists, Madam!" the livery wearing chauffeur had declared wearily, "It is that time of the year again. This lot will stop at nothing, even dodging death for a quick photograph!"
    A small but excited reaction coming from Tina made Bette turn around to look at her. 
    "What is it, Honey?" Bette had asked puzzled.
    "Oh Bette!" Tina had exclaimed realising she knew exactly why it was that they were stuck into unmoving traffic, "You have got to see that!’
    Before Bette had had time to react, a near child like Tina had grabbed the brunette’s hand and was pulling her with her as she exited the stopped car, not before apologising to their driver, to emerge out on the crowded street. They tottered about on their high heels, squeezing and swerving around cars stuck in the now impromptu car park and reached the nearest pavement. 
    From there, Tina practically ran back out to the centre of the road at the intersection of two perfectly perpendicular thoroughfares. There, she carefully manoeuvred Bette, so that the brunette faced in the same direction as the throngs of already gathered onlookers.
    Impatient drivers tried, at first, to negotiate a detour around the road invading pedestrians but it was to no avail and they reluctantly but unavoidably settled for waiting out the biannual event sporadically expressing their annoyance with an angry sound of a horn.
    “What are we looking at?” Bette asked visibly still puzzled by the situation and now slightly intimidated by the spontaneous concert of klaxons and their position in the middle of a busy road.
    42nd street extended, straight as a die, in front of them just like any other typical street in the rigid grid like pattern of Manhattan.
    “You’ll see, “Tina said placing herself in front of Bette, her back to the brunette, “Just a few more seconds!”
    Instinctively, Bette wrapped her arms around the smaller woman in front of her and waited as instructed.
    And it did not take long.
    The brief pause did not disappoint as the edges of buildings started to grow bright, anticipating the setting sun to wax into view.
    Looking West along the busy street, they saw the bright orange globe slowly begin to appear along the small horizon line which marked the end of the street, to line up with the centre line of the road, bathing the deceptively narrow corridor, ahead of them, with glowing light.
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    7. K!!!!! Thank you so much for considering us as a priority! 😱 you are definitely one of my priories to read on this site. That epi was beautiful, as only can do. Thank you😃👍

    10. Kins..again..thank you so much for this incredible journey! You are truly an amazing gifted writer.Thank you for taking us on this beautiful trip!!

    11. I was one of those silent readers who rarely commented, but I just wanted to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed this beautiful love story. Thank you so much for coming back with an epi. What an awesome story. Can’t wait for your next one. :) Please keep posting when you can.

    13. Truly Fantastic!!! Thank you so much for the epilogue. Your writing and the description of 42nd St. was simply fantastic. Does that really happen on 42nd street and how often. Does everything have to line up or the sun to be in just the right place for it to happen? Would love to see that. Thanks again for bringing us this story. Perfection!!! Thanks.

    18. I’m glad that this post came to the light, it is brilliant so much romantic it can be a V-Day present and I will consider it one so thank u very much u made my whole V-week LOL ;DI hope we can see ur name again in new stories soon, wish u good luck with ur choices ;D thank u again very much!

    23. Wow! Thanks for the surprise!! :-) amazing chapter Kins!! ;-) And may I wish you good luck for your projects and wish that you’ll have time to share your next story (soon?!) :oDx

    25. Wowww… Amazing epilogue! So beautiful… Gosh, that sunset sounds simply breathtaking! And the proposal was just magic. Way to go, Porter!!! Loved the little bit at the event and Bette’s speech. Exactly the kind of little “moments” in their new life together I was hoping to see. It was perfect! Sorry for not commenting earlier (I read it the day before yesterday late in the evening and was quite busy yesterday…). So glad and grateful that you granted us with an epilogue to this amazing story. As for your other projects, you know you have all my support in whatever you decide! Talk soon! xxx Kw

    26. Oh joy & happy dance!!! Kins, thank you for the belated Valentine gift of Savannah. What a marvelous and satisfying conclusion to an equally marvelous and satisfying story (sigh). I’m simply amazed that you packed so much into four pages yet it never felt rushed, flowed well and completely drew me in at every turn. Your epi remind me yet again what a truly gifted writer you are and also made me realize how much I’d missed your writing. A few thoughts: 1 – Tina’s birthmark; did you make that tasty little detail up or is that from the extensive “research” you do for your stories???, and 2 – leave it to you to tease us about your unrevealed “future project” (you just can’t resist leaving us hanging can you ;). Looking forward to your return whenever that may be – whatever you have planned will no doubt be a treat. Cheers to you kiddo – iHH xxx

    27. It all been said, but still worthy of praise. Wonderful, classy, and beautifully portrayed love story with a most intriguing backdrop. Thank you for always preserving the purity of TiBette’s physical love. Good luck with your future projects.

    29. Absolute perfection dear friend. I could read you all day long. You have such a poetic way with words that always leaves me completely satisfied, yet wanting more. I guess I’m insatiable when it comes to your words. ;)

    30. Great story from beginning to end very beautifully written with such detail…Enjoyed every bit of it. I love different beginning and this one was unique and creative. Thank you for sharing.
      BnT.

    31. I knew it was a good idea to come back to this story. Enjoyed it a lot!
      You painted a beautiful picture of the Kenyan Sanvanah. Actually you made me think about going to Africa on vacation.
      Amazing describtion of nature and wild life. It feels like I’m there when the plot is unfolding.
      Very thorougly researched facts on veterinary medicine, the care of game and life in a game preserve.

      Thanks for having Jodi as such an evil character. I didn’t like her in the series. Never understood what good that should do for Bette’s story line…

      Alright, I think I’m going to start reading “epistolary affair” again :-)

      Thank you for this great story.

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