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Secretes Ep 1
Story written on June 28, 2005 by angylmyana.
(Jenny is reading to herself from a novel about stigmatism)
CARMEN-(walks into the living room sucking a lollipop ,flops down on the couch and smiles a bright wide smile at jenny) Hey ! what ya reading?
JENNY- the ‘karma of stigmatism’. Want to hear a passage?
CARMEN- uhm. no thats ok.
((*dead silence*))
JENNY- ((jenny lowers her book as she speaks))so do you live with us now ?
CARMEN- (smurks and uncomfortably sits up and speaks) Uhm. no, no i dont i just figured that i could spend the weekend with shane. If thats ok.
JENNY- yeah, yeah i mean thats cool.(jenny stares blankly at carmen) do you want to live here?
CARMEN- no, i actually like my apartment. I like it better when its not cold and full of echoes.
JENNY- meaning you like it better when you arent alone?
CARMEN- basically.
((*again dead silence, sounds of the ceiling fan whirling*))
JENNY- so maybe you should pack up shane and move her in with you .
CARMEN- or maybe i should just continue to see her whenever possible and keep my bacherlor pad all to myself.(carmen gets up and walks into the kitchen and starts going through the refrigerator)
JENNY- you may as well just move in. Im sure shane wouldnt mind.(She closes her book and walks towards the kitchen )Im definitely sure shane would love it.(She stands glaring at carmen)
CARMEN- no its really ok.Is there a problem jenny?
JENNY- no. nope.
CARMEN- well youre really acting weird.Its kinda scary.
JENNY-yeah.scary.thats me.
CARMEN-(snacks on her cupcake and sips on her juice, silence)
JENNY-(leans agaisnt the wall and folds her arms across her chest) So why did you do it carmen?
CARMEN- do what?
JENNY- use me? play with shanes mind. i mean is that what youre doing now?, or did things go the way you wanted?i mean are you happy?//
CARMEN- i didnt… i didnt use you. if it seems that i did. im sorry . i didnt mean to. i just.
JENNY- just what? just couldnt bare to see yourself without shane so you decide to throw me in the middle as bait?
CARMEN- no! jen, i dont know what to say.
JENNY- dont say anything. its better that way. i guess(jenny walks away and see’s shane walking towards the kitchen)Always in the right place at the right time ay shane?
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not bad….yeah good. The shane and carmen part was really good. go on!!
i like the fact that you addressed the fact that jenny WOULD be hurt by Shane and Carmen practically living with so soon after she and carmen’s relationship- it’s asking a lot to ask her to ‘watch’ so to speak.
as for her and shane together- i have seen that spark with them too- it’s fun to see it addressed in a fanfic.
HOWEVER– cure dana. not fun. wrong bloodtests?? : )
I like it so far. But I think Jenny knew what she was getting into and what she was describing about Carmen and Shane is what she did to shane so….Alls fair in love and war, lol
Well thi is fanfic world, and you have all the right to pairing who you want and give Dana cancer (snif), keep going.