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Secretes Ep 1
Story written on June 28, 2005 by angylmyana.
SHANE-((shane stands up andwalks towards jenny to speak face to face.They stand face direct as shane is about to speak she becomes drawn in by jennys eyes, they kiss.Long…breathtaking, unexpected.Jenny pulls away)) Im sorry.
((JENNY embarrisingly looks over at shane, but looks away quickly with slight anger))
SHANE- Im just really mixed up.im going to go. im sorry.((walks out and slowly closes the door behind her. she stands at the door with her head pressed agaisnt it, banging her head slowly and tormentingly))
CARMEN- shane i think we should talk.
SHANE- sure, no problem.((shane walks into the bathroom.carmen is sitting on the toilet with the lid down using it as her seat. shane sitss on the rug on the ground)Whats up?
CARMEN- im sorry.
SHANE- for what?
CARMEN- for everything. what i did to jenny , the way i acted out towards you , my every move was in thought of you whether it was good or bad and im just realizing how much i hurt jenny and shes not accepting my apologies.
SHANE- no, wait a minute carmen you cant go around apologizing for your emotions i mean thats just something that you cant control.
CARMEN- yeah i know but i should be able to stop and think about the people that im involving in my fucked up moments of revenge.
SHANE- jenny will forgive you., she just needs a little time.
CARMEN- and what about you ?
SHANE- what about me?
CARMEN- just like that shane, you forgive me?
SHANE-yeah.
CARMEN- why?
SHANE- we all make mistakes.
CARMEN- and what was yours?
SHANE((stares into space for a few seconds and puts her hands across her face and exhales with a heavy sigh)) look carmen none of that matters.
CARMEN-((Stares at shane in disbelief and dissapointment))I cant believe you . theres something isnt it? Someone?
SHANE- no.
CARMEN- well what is it shane?
SHANE-carmen, theres no one, nothing.
CARMEN- what is this shane, its like you cant help but keep everything locked away from me.Well you know what shane. I can see through your secrets, and theres a secret in there that i think that you know will tear us apart, and its tearing you apart right now.When youre ready to stop keeping secrets shane, you let me know.((Carmen leaves the bathroom)
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not bad….yeah good. The shane and carmen part was really good. go on!!
i like the fact that you addressed the fact that jenny WOULD be hurt by Shane and Carmen practically living with so soon after she and carmen’s relationship- it’s asking a lot to ask her to ‘watch’ so to speak.
as for her and shane together- i have seen that spark with them too- it’s fun to see it addressed in a fanfic.
HOWEVER– cure dana. not fun. wrong bloodtests?? : )
I like it so far. But I think Jenny knew what she was getting into and what she was describing about Carmen and Shane is what she did to shane so….Alls fair in love and war, lol
Well thi is fanfic world, and you have all the right to pairing who you want and give Dana cancer (snif), keep going.