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Secretes Ep 1
Story written on June 28, 2005 by angylmyana.
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SHANE(walks over to carmen and kisses her. )whats up with you two?
CARMEN-(pulls her hair away from her face and begins to walk away) A mess.
SHANE-(walks behind carmen and goes to jennys door and begins to speak through)
Hey jen, you got a minute?
JENNY-if its about carmen there is no need for conversation.
SHANE- well i just wanted to talk to you jen , cmon.
JENNY- ((*silence*))
SHANE-jenny i just wan—
JENNY-(jenny opens up the door and walks back towards her bed)Close the door behind you please.
SHANE-(closes the door and heads over to jennys desk)So whats going on with you ?
JENNY- nothing. just finishing up the 3rd chapter in my story.
SHANE-uh huh. so what was up with the whole kitchen exit.
JENNY-(frustratingly shakes her head and bites the corner of her lip. She cuts her eyes at shane as she begins to speak) Why does it matter to you shane?
SHANE- because one im your roommate so i feel entitled, two im carmens girlfriend so i find it to be a very important part on my half to know.Three because i give a *****.
JENNY- its none of your business shane(jenny tosses the pillow on the bed that she was holding and stands up and walks towards her closet.)
SHANE-(grabs jenny by her wrist and pulls her towards her)JEN! whats the matter? is something bothering you ? i mean just tell me what it is?
JENNY- its nothing!
SHANE- why are you lying to me?
JENNY- ok you know ,fine, fine shane! its YOU , its HER, its both of you . I dont know what it is, i mean im a strong person. I thought i could handle it.
SHANE- what cant you handle?
JENNY- all of it. its just, to me it seems like to carmen this was all a game. She used me like a looser friend to get to the popular kid. Then she flaunts you all over the place. and she has no shame.
SHANE- jenny, is that what this is about? i mean because , theres always been something between me and carmen. We both just werent ready to take ahold of it.
JENNY- well im happy that you both found yourselves at the same time.Can i have my arm back please?
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not bad….yeah good. The shane and carmen part was really good. go on!!
i like the fact that you addressed the fact that jenny WOULD be hurt by Shane and Carmen practically living with so soon after she and carmen’s relationship- it’s asking a lot to ask her to ‘watch’ so to speak.
as for her and shane together- i have seen that spark with them too- it’s fun to see it addressed in a fanfic.
HOWEVER– cure dana. not fun. wrong bloodtests?? : )
I like it so far. But I think Jenny knew what she was getting into and what she was describing about Carmen and Shane is what she did to shane so….Alls fair in love and war, lol
Well thi is fanfic world, and you have all the right to pairing who you want and give Dana cancer (snif), keep going.