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Secretes Ep 1
Story written on June 28, 2005 by angylmyana.
SHANE- ((slouches down into a ball against the wall)) SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITTTT!!!!(SHE SCREAMS OUT AND ECHOES))
((DANA wakes up in a hospital bed, looking around, weak and cold))
DANA(speaking to self)What the ***** am i doing here?–al?
(( alice awoke to hearing dana yell her name.Rubbing her eyes and lowering the blanket from her head rapidly)
ALICE- are you ok ?
DANA- why am i in a hospital bed?, in paper gown?
ALICE- oh, *****, D. I…… i dont know a good way to tell you this…
DANA-tell me what? what is it dammnit!
ALICE-Dana…I…
DR. GIBSON- (he walks straight into the room and opens up the drapes and places a fresh vase or roses on the stand next to bed) Good morning ladies,its a bright and beautiful day outside.How about some air hmm?
DANA- whats wrong with me?(dana gives off an evil look to the doctor ,she stands and walks towards him)
DR GIBSON- oh, i see you still dont know the new yet.Miss Pieszecki here thought it would be better if she told you herself.So i guess i will leave you to the news.
(he exited the room slowly closing the door behind him, the room feel silent for apx 10 seconds.Alice kept exchanghing quick eye glances with dana)
DANA- what is he talking about al?
ALICE- Dana look, last night, when they tested you, you were fine.Perfect your blood work came back STD free…just like me..
DANA- ok well thats great, i mean , yeah thats awesome, so whats the problem?
ALICE- well you passed out about 5 minutes later in the waiting room waiting on me when i came out and the doctor told you the news …cancer.
DANA-(danas happy emotions face drowned in her sadness, she sat on the edge of the bed)Cancer, what kind of cancer?
ALICE- its just… bone cancer.
DANA- what?..WHAT!..oh its ‘just bone cancer’
ALICE- yeah,.. dana i mean a few treatments and youll still be keeping on your feet i mean whats the big deal?
DANA- the deal is im dying, or ill actually die alot quicker than i should and that sucks , i mean geeezuz…((dana pulls her hair back into a handmade ponytail and lets it fall over her face as tears roll down from her eyes and fall onto her paper gown))
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not bad….yeah good. The shane and carmen part was really good. go on!!
i like the fact that you addressed the fact that jenny WOULD be hurt by Shane and Carmen practically living with so soon after she and carmen’s relationship- it’s asking a lot to ask her to ‘watch’ so to speak.
as for her and shane together- i have seen that spark with them too- it’s fun to see it addressed in a fanfic.
HOWEVER– cure dana. not fun. wrong bloodtests?? : )
I like it so far. But I think Jenny knew what she was getting into and what she was describing about Carmen and Shane is what she did to shane so….Alls fair in love and war, lol
Well thi is fanfic world, and you have all the right to pairing who you want and give Dana cancer (snif), keep going.