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    Sensory Overload

    Story written on July 30, 2014 by RobbieRob.
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    Words: 6880
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=86273
    Author Notes:

    Get it under control! She’s waking up! You have to get it together! Jesus! Yes, I’m asking for help here! I have to move! I have to break away from her now! Ok, ok. Be calm. Don’t jerk away, just be cool. Be casual. Slow movements. No need to startle her. Think slothlike Bette. Sssslllllloooooowwwww…..

    Get it under control! She’s waking up! You have to get it together! Jesus! Yes, I’m asking for help here! I have to move! I have to break away from her now!

    Ok, ok. Be calm. Don’t jerk away, just be cool. Be casual. Slow movements. No need to startle her. Think slothlike Bette. Sssslllllloooooowwwww…..

    I remove my arm from around her waist and roll onto my back breaking contact. Then, I slowly move over a few inches and turn back onto my side facing her back. I watch her carefully for a moment, hoping that my sudden departure would not be perceived as anything negative. I know she’s awake because her breathing has changed. I told her I would be here when she woke up, but considering she can’t feel me now, I should probably speak up to assure her of my presence.

    “Good morning beautiful.”

    Sense #4: Sight

    The experience of sight begins when photons from the world hit the lens of our eye, and get focused onto a small patch of photoreceptive cells on a part of the eye called the retina. These cells come in two types – rods and cones. Rods and cones perform a function called phototransduction, which simply means converting incoming light into electrical signals to be sent to the brain, making sight possible.

    It’s no secret that I think Tina is the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen. I have said that from the first moment we met at my gallery 2 months ago. I am not just being biased either. Others would absolutely agree that she is stunning and has an incredible body as well, but today it is different.

    She speaks softly as she turns over to face me. “Good morning indeed.”

    Here we are face to face. Only inches apart. I can feel the warmth of her breath on my cheeks. I have seen her face countless times since we met, but nothing could have prepared me for this moment. NOTHING!

    I could have sworn I heard the voice of God whisper…”yes, I made that.” No work of art could ever compare, and I am fully confident that Michelangelo himself would have bowed down to this superior masterpiece. This was far beyond physical beauty. This was a glimpse into her soul, her complete internal structure laid bare before my eyes.

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    2. This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.

      You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.

      It was very funny.

    3. Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…

    4. Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…

    6. fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
      Bette and Tina love.
      I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
      You’re a great writer.
      Congratulations!
      anxious for a new chapter…

    7. You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.

    8. Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!

      It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)

      Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.

    9. Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!

    12. I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
      I really love the way you write your story.
      I look forward to the next chapter.

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