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    Sensory Overload

    Story written on July 30, 2014 by RobbieRob.
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    Words: 6880
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=86273
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    I drink her in slowly and deeply like a fine wine. So natural, so beautiful. No makeup, hair a mess, and yet, I have never seen anything more breathtaking and I feel myself losing consciousness. Flatline: 
1 a: to register on an electronic monitor as having no brain waves or heartbeat
 b: die
 2 a

    I drink her in slowly and deeply like a fine wine. So natural, so beautiful. No makeup, hair a mess, and yet, I have never seen anything more breathtaking and I feel myself losing consciousness.

    Flatline:
    
1 a: to register on an electronic monitor as having no brain waves or heartbeat

    b: die

    2 a :  to be in a state of no progress or advancement

    b :  to come to an end

    Then, she speaks again “how did you sleep babe?”

    I hear her, but it takes a moment for my brain to catch up to my ears. She’s looking at me now with a curious expression. Does she know the effect she has had on me since last night? If she does, she does not seem even the least bit remorseful.

    Oh, I should speak!
    “Umm…sorry. Yes, I slept wonderfully. Better than ever actually. You?”

    “It was amazing. So deep and peaceful.”

    “No bad dreams then?”

    “Nope, no bad dreams. In fact, I had a dream about you.”

    “Really? Care to share?” I can see the redness creep up from her neck to her face. I can feel the heat radiating from her skin. Oh yes, I know that look. Damn! Must have been one of those kinds of dreams. I hope I was good…Shit! Now she’s embarrassed. I didn’t mean to embarrass her, fuck!

    “You don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to T.”

    “Umm…I do. It’s just…”

    “It’s ok, I understand and I don’t want to make you feel uncomfortable. Let’s get up and get some breakfast huh?”

    I get up and walk around to her side of the bed and extend my hand as a peace offering to let her know that it’s ok. She doesn’t have to talk about it. I know those dreams and their effects and when you’re trying to come to terms with a new found sexuality, it can be a lot to process. I am patient. I will wait. She takes my hand and stands up beside me. I start to walk towards the bedroom door, but she stops our progression. I turn and give her a perplexed look.

    “Something wrong T?”

    She looks up at me with tears in her eyes and with ragged breath she responds.

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    Comments

    2. This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.

      You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.

      It was very funny.

    3. Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…

    4. Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…

    6. fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
      Bette and Tina love.
      I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
      You’re a great writer.
      Congratulations!
      anxious for a new chapter…

    7. You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.

    8. Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!

      It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)

      Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.

    9. Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!

    12. I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
      I really love the way you write your story.
      I look forward to the next chapter.

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