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Sensory Overload
After last Saturday night, I am a firm believer!
I took in her words and allowed my brain to process for a moment, then replied by asking her to turn on her side facing away from me. I scooted up against her until the front of my body met her back, then I moved even closer and wrapped my arms around her and pulled her tighter against me. The tops of my feet to the bottoms of hers. Our legs intertwined. Her perfect ass molding into my sacred place. Her back into my torso. Her head resting gently under my chin.
(Oh shit! It’s happening again! System override!)
According to overdose.com, when injected, heroin makes its way across the blood-brain barrier, is converted into morphine, and fits into the mu opioid receptor in the brain and turns it on. Within seven to eight seconds, the drug user feels a rush of euphoria.
Seven to eight seconds, my ass! The effects, and no doubt new addiction were immediate! The pure essence of her being crawled into my veins without aid of needle and spoon. I have transcended into an alternate plane. This is beyond any high achievable in the natural realm. I’ve been with women, many women, but never like this. This is so much more than those experiences. Nothing has ever made me feel this alive, this satisfied! This is not about sex or getting to the finish line of a sprint race. No, on the contrary, this is a marathon. A graceful stride and slow deep breaths are key here.
I wonder if she can feel my heart pounding in my chest? Internal combustion seems inevitable. Ok, try to relax. Just breathe. Get yourself under control here Bette! You have a long night ahead of you if you don’t relax and sleep. Ok, ok I’m good. Better check on her.
“Are you ok T? Is this too much?”
“It’s perfect babe. Just perfect. Good night.”
“Good night baby. Have sweet dreams & I promise I’ll be right here when you wake up.”
I give her a reassuring squeeze and reach over her to turn off the lamp, then settle back into my new favorite place. Yes, I am addicted. Now, bring on those sweet dreams…
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(20 votes, average: 4.85 out of 5)
Absolutely loved it. Had me laughing. Thanks
This was so good, it made me smile the whole time.
You have a unique way to tell your story and i absolute love the way you wrote about Bette’s insights.
It was very funny.
Now look at you, RR, you are 2 funny! You’ve done it again! Toldya’ you’d write page turner updates. Tko’d by Tina?….naw…more like ‘pussywhipped’ my dear. I can imagine your “NC17” posts…now that’s gonna be worth waiting for! Hope you keep posting and soon…you had me lmfao the whole time I was reading…made my day! You’re a great writer, keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend…
Very intriguing,very detailed and entertaining, well researched and I love every minute of it, this should definitely keep going ready for next chapter…
Yes I agree we need another chapter pretty please by the way this was so good pps.
fantastic! Loved all the details of this story.
Bette and Tina love.
I was also dry mouth, reading the thoughts of Bette.
You’re a great writer.
Congratulations!
anxious for a new chapter…
You have the ability to make me actually laugh, not just when I am reading it, but later as I recall the story. That is something to cherish. Please continue with this story.
Thanks everyone for all the positive feedback!
It’s such an incredible feeling to know that something I created can make so many people happy. :)
Bless you all for taking the time to read! More to come, I promise. Please be patient with me though.
Agree wholeheartedly with all the Comments! Made me LOL but also I retained a smile on my face and a warm feeling in the region of my heart. Love this couple together and in love! Great writing please do more!
Thanks! I love Bette like this in their relationship. By that I mean unsure of herself! Too cute! PPS
Love it,please continue writing.
I really liked it. I love your sense of humor. as I read the story, through a smile on my face, I loved the detailed description of Bette.
I really love the way you write your story.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Brilliant. The “major Tom” bit made me laugh like a maniac for some reason. (and now that song is stuck in my head, lol)
Very enjoyable glad there will be more to come. A fun read for sure.
Great story and funny. Can’t wait for the next post. Maybe some nc17, hint hint. Thanks
Lovely tale! So emotional and yet funny. I wish we could see this story of yours going forward. Thank you!
Loved it!! Thank you
Great story loved it..