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    Sharmen: I Gotta Go…Part17

    Story written on September 5, 2005 by CasperFanFirst.
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    Truths are told, Shane heads back to where it all began… and doesn’t come home.

    Mercedes let the curtain fall threw her fingers as Shane’s pick-up truck backed out of the driveway. She shook her head as tears built in her eyes. What had she done? Maybe it was wrong to send them away. She didn’t know what was right. Carmen was happy. Really happy, not now, but with Shane. She could see it. Shane was good to her, she could see that too. Just from watching them for the few minutes they were in the driveway. But Carmen and her had always had a great relationship, she told her everything. It worked both ways, or so she had thought at least. And now to find out her daughter had been keeping such an enormous part of herself under wraps from her own family? It was too much all at once.

    Chapter 40

    “Shh, baby- please stop crying Car. God, please stop crying,” Shane whispered the last part to herself because Carmen was so far inside herself, she couldn’t hear anything Shane said. She contemplated whether or not Carmen even knew she was there. She just held her tightly in her arms as she rocked back and forth on the couch muttering to herself in Spanish.

    Carmen finally stopped rocking and holding her head for a second and lifted her head up. Her eyes were so puffy and red and sore she could barely see out of them.

    “Shane?” She asked in a strained stroked voice.

    “Yeah. Yeah baby, I’m here,” Shane said quietly, stroking her girlfriends back in long swooping circles.

    “I know,” Carmen said and Shane breathed a tiny sigh of relief. “I’m sorry. I- I” Carmen choked and scrunched her face up again, “I just-” She made a face and stuck her head in the crook of Shane’s neck. Her forehead and lips contorted as she tried not to cry again. She breathed deeply and bit her lip. Shane waited with bated breath for her to either cry again or start thinking clearly.

    She breathed out a long straight breath and looked up, plastering a smile on her face more for her own benefit then Shanes.

    “I’m okay,” she said quietly. Shane never moved, spoke or even blinked. She just stared straight into Carmen’s eyes with a half faraway, half intently listening face. Carmen smiled broadly again through puffy red eyes as she heaved a sigh and pressed her palms down on her legs which were crossed neatly, her shins brushing Shane’s lightly as they sat almost mirror image. Shane blinked finally but kept staring.

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    1. F#*%ing EXCELLENT! I loved it. For a minute there I thought Shane was going to a dealer. Its so typical and sweet of Shane to take matters into her own hands. Glad it worked out for them. Also liked how you wrote Mercedes, as a conflicted mother who loves her child but doesn’t understand her lifestyle. I could go on & on w/ praise but I’ll stop short by once again stating Great Job. Post soon

    9. I just discovered your story, and read all 17 parts over the past 3 days. I am so into this things its ridiculous, you are such an imaginative writer and you usually wrap things up at the end of each part so we don’t walk away with someone being totally pissed at someone else and we’re hanging on the edge, yet we still have that degree of wondering. I give you props for that, its a hard thing to do, and I look forward to more!

    11. Oh My God…. Can you believe I actually thought you were going to break them up again cuz if you would have that would have been like so messed up anyways this story is like so freakin’ cool the whole time I’ve been reading it, it has had me at the edge of my seat I totally love it. You are an amazing writer and should really continue this story till the end which I hope isn’t any time soon :P
      But please do continue your great work and if it’s not too much to ask update soon Please I’m dying to know what’s going to happen to them next :P

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