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Shipwrecked!, Ch. 1
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Dana let out a small yelp, leaping aside as the cooler slid across the deck of the boat, nearly crashing into her legs. It slid to the other side, where it smashed into a bench with a crash.
Alice took a few deep breaths, trying to calm herself, and also struggling to remember what she’d been about to say before the lightning had interrupted her.
“Um, Alice?” a soft voice said from her side.
“Now what?” Alice grumbled, turning to find a wide-eyed Jenny beside her.
“I don’t want to scare anybody,” Jenny started in a near-whisper, “but I think there’s a problem. There seems to be an awful lot of water coming in the boat.”
“Water is starting to splash over the sides,” Alice pointed out, pulling Jenny by the elbow a little further away from the group.
“I know that,” Jenny replied. “But it’s worse than that.”
Alice bit her lip. “You mean…?”
Jenny shrugged. “I don’t know.”
“When were you going to share this information with the rest of us?” a voice boomed out, and they both whipped around to see Helena watching them.
“What information?” Alice asked, her mouth suddenly dry.
Helena lowered her voice, leaning in close. “That we’re sinking.”
Jenny let out a little gasp.
Alice rubbed her temples. “You’re sure?”
“I wish I were wrong, but I’m sure I’m right. We’re retaining water, and it’s getting worse quickly. Any moment now the sky is going to open up and the rain is only going to make it worse,” Helena informed them.
“What’s going on?” Bette demanded, stepping between them.
Alice, not knowing any other way to say it, simply stated, “We’re sinking.”
Near pandemonium broke out, as the women began shouting and yelling, throwing their arms around, all looking just as panicked and fearful as Alice felt.
“Calm down,” Tina said, raising her voice to be heard above everyone else. “Screaming isn’t going to help us. We need to get moving and figure out how to get out of this situation. Helena, how long do you think we have?”
Biting her lip, Helena glanced around them before looking up at the sky, blinking at the fat raindrops that fell onto her face. “I can’t say for sure. Depending on how rough the ocean gets, and how badly it rains, it could be within minutes. We seem to be going down pretty quickly. It’s hard to even say for sure how long we’ve been taking on water, or if there was damage to it that started this whole thing. Either way, we won’t make it to shore like this.”
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OH SHIT! I cant wait to read more@!!!
This is great! I love action adventure. Please post soon… you left us hanging in suspense.
Land them on the same island as giligan! Alice could go out with Ginger to make Dana jelous.post soon =)
*CLAPS* Very well done, this is the originality I’ve been hoping for. Please, keep going you now have me intrigued
OMG!!! This is really exciting stuff. I love lots of drama and action! Hope they all get out of the water ok! Dana might realise how much Alice means to her now, thinkin that she may have lost her. Lovin it already so keep it up. Thanks.
OMG…no, you can’t stop here? Where will they end up? I need to know if the’re all going to be ok? Alice? Shane? I loved the way you portray the interactions between the gang. It brought me back to the feeling I had watching S1.
Very cool. I have missed your stories! This is super exciting! Glad to see you back. Post again soon :)
I’ve really missed your stories, so I am REALLY glad that you started a new one. Excellent start, and I can’t wait to see where you take us with it. You’re such a talented writer, and you really do bring back the good, fun season 1 feel to the girls! :-) (But I would love you even more if Danish worked it out!!)
Haha! Fox, you’re back too! How wonderful to ‘see’ you. As always, I expect the expected from your stories, one of the many reasons why it’s always such a thrill to read them. So who’s gonna die? :D No more hooky eh
About time you showed yourself back on here! It has been waaay too long. I’m loving The Lost Word, but since they’re on an island, having them run Baywatch-style wouldn’t hurt the next time someone drowns… Just a suggestion. Glad to see you back and writing again!
Wow… just, WOW!!!! That is such an awesome story! Actually, more than awesome!! I`m already addicted to it, loved it!!! Please continue soon!
holy crap! Something different and I enjoyed it. Hope you continue.
Awesome, keep going
hopefull u’re not gonna kill anyone, and we’re gonna get loads of B & T sex on the beach….shane & carmen too, BOT MORE B & T…..lol
Interesting and exciting new take on our girls from WeHo. Please continue
Just sit right back and you’ll hear a tale, a tale of a fateful trip.That started from this tropic port,aboard this tiny ship… Sorry wrong show. =) Very good story, I can’t wait to read what happens next.
Dang! Now there’s some drama for you on a Saturday morning!! Welcome back…sorry to hear you are going through some not so fun parts of life. Just try to remember…everything is temporary. Thanks!
Great start! but why Shane had to get hurt?? awww she is my favorite so please let her be ok :P I cant wait for next chapter :)
You came back with a big bang. hope all tthe girls are alright. The should have taken Helena ship. Alice thing want get her desposit back. thanks
I was totally amazed when I saw that you were back and so very excited! Your comeback has me hanging on the edge.. what a fantastic story line. You better not leave again… I’ll beg if I have to but it wouldn’t be pretty, lol. Please post again soon! Yay, Forefire’s back and is amazing as ever!
Wow, what an awesome story. Nothing like a little blood to attract the sharks.
Just read your fic again today. I know, I already left a comment, but this one is so beyond well-written! I love it so much and please … as a “Shipwrecked addict”, I need more!!! *smile*
Hey FF, Fabulous to have you back on the site and post such an unique and inticing story. A cross between Lost and Pirates of the Carribean comes to mind and nowt wrong with that in my book. Absolutely hysterical from Kit’s cell phnoe home run pitch to losing her hat. Alice replacing the lifeboat with a cooler. Too few lifejackets… Brilliant and I can’t wait to see what Chapter 2 brings. Thank you so much for coming back and adding this hilarity to my life. Your gratiful and Loyal Fan.
Loving the start of this, can’t wait to see where it goes so update soon please!!. little bit off topic but any chance of some more danish PWP?