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Si me ves, o no
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“I’ve been sleeping since yesterday afternoon. I don’t think I can sleep ever again.” She took Bette’s hand in hers and lapsed their fingers together. When she looked up, she almost whimpered at the emotions she found in her warm brown eyes. It was like they traveled back in time, and she was looking at the timid girl in her Spanish class, often giving her the gentlest stares, except now she had more confidence and more passion.
Bette chuckled and diverted her eyes. She couldn’t start it again. She knew if she were to kiss her again, she wouldn’t be able to pull away, and she had work to do. Overnight, she made a decision, probably not the best or most humane, but the best one she could make out right now. “I’m leaving in twenty minutes. I don’t want you to go out this room today.”
“What—? You can’t do that.” Tina immediately protested. She had to update her superior today. But she realized her reaction was being a little dramatic. “I mean, I need to get Jodi’s meds.”
“It’s been taken care of.” Bette left her side, and walked to the nightstand, picked up Tina’s phone, computer, and her own telephone. “I’ll be keeping these today. The phone is unplugged, wifi is down. Now there’s food in the fridge, bathroom’s over there. Anything else?”
“Yes, why you’re doing this?” Tina quickly got up and held her hands across her chest.
Bette was temporarily distracted by the sight before her. She could most definitely see through Tina’s thin shirt, knowing she had nothing underneath. But she shook her head and chastised herself one more time. “You know too much. Now I can’t risk letting you go out and tell someone that there’ll be a deal at the Hutchinson pier, can I?”
Tina widened her eyes.
“Yeah, I know you heard all of it.” Bette squinted a little, but quickly found her tone a bit harsh. She sighed and came back to take the woman into her embrace. “I’m just trying to protect you, ok? Like I said, it’s not important what you were trying to do, I can overlook everything, but you’re with me now, it’s my responsibility to keep you safe.”
Although she had never wanted somebody else to take care of her, Tina found Bette’s motives moving. If she was just a dumb blonde nurse having walked into the wrong place, she would probably let the brunette take care of everything and just stayed in the house waiting for her to come back, even if it meant she had to live in the terror knowing there was always a chance she could never see her again. She would do that, she would build a life here. But she wasn’t just a dumb girl in the wrong situation. She had responsibilities too.
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First thing first, SO to the lovely ladies reading and commenting!
Simonem, yep I changed quite a few things here and there, hope you find my pace comfortable.
doc, bibi, lipitora, SG, wkm, thanks for stopping by, ladies. I do my best to not disappoint!
lakeeskin Awww thanks so much for stepping up as a rep of the silent readers. Lots of love to you!
TN1, you know how much I love you… too much to be spoken, so I gift you my story instead :)
doris, mscully, Lishalove, thanks guys! Stop by anytime and lots of love to you as well!
Ahh I know you expect longer chapters. But this just seems like a right place to stop. I’ll let you guys imagine what happens to that bastard Henry for a while.
As for the poem in the chapter, I did the translation, my apologies in advance to any Spanish speaking readers, I know very little about poems or Spanish for that matter…
But the original version, in Chinese mind if I add, was absolutely breathtaking and heartbreaking. It’s the sixth Dalai Lama’s love poem “To see or not to see”, also changed it a bit coz I can’t remember the exact words.
Ok, now back to work, hopefully I’ll post another very soon.
Peace :)
Really liked the poem. So Henry is going to trap himself. Hope Bette and Tina are smarter than Jorge. Loved it, thanks
This chapter is the falling in love chapter. We. Know Bette loves Tina… She always has. Tina cares deeply for Bette and she is trying to understand why. This chapter had all of the elements of two people falling… The push, the pull, give and take, desire and will to protect and support. That’s the story but the way YOU wrote it is just as harmonious for us. We fall in love too… with the characters, the story, and the author. You are doing to us what Bette and Tina are doing to each other… A little give, a little mystery, wanting, hoping, etc. I love that you ended this chapter at this point. As any new lover I want to wonder about “what’s next” and I want to be comforted in my knowledge that I will be taken care of. Still loving this story.
Nice, sweet, and entertaining chapter. I loved it!
Wonderful update, keeps you interested.
Jorge is a very smart man and Henry seems to meet his destination.
Pps.
I really liked this chapter.
You’re very talented, but I have repeatedly told you. :)
I really enjoy the way you weave in mysterious fibers in this story. I liked it in the end you’re left temporarily in our imagination, what will happen.
I’m so glad that Tina was so smart to find a suspicious situation. and Bette and her, so no one was hurt in the end.
I hope they will eventually figure out how to go beyond Jorge brains.
It was a great chapter. I’m looking forward to the next one!
yeah,I like what you have done,but next time please mark it with NC-17,I want to be well prepared,you know what I mean!
The poem was beautiful just like this progressing story. Thankful for your imagination and talent to put it in writing!!
Different and interesting story. I worry though about them all the while I’m reading!
Love every chapter! Can’t wait too see how things go between Bette, Tina and the mob. Oh, and no need to solve this quickly, the longer the story, the better for us! ;)
Hmmm now i am worried about Tina cause if Henry is going to die he may give up info about her Then what would Tibette do !!!
Loved the chapter, I hope Bette is smart enough to get out of this situation by giving up evidence and helping Tina get the bad guys. PPS
Beautiful and wonderful poem, I love poems.
Bette lovely dedicated so much love Tina,
and I’m still concerned about the fact
Bette really be a criminal.
10 Stars.
go to the next chapter.