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    Story written on November 6, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57488
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    And she just looks at me… and smiles


    Not so fast


    But she did.


    Slow, don’t want to hurt the girl


    ‘She’s so ***** beautiful’. Carmen was sitting in the back of a taxi and watching the scenery go by while thinking about her favorite and most difficult to understand subject, Shane. The most beautiful and most mysterious woman she’d ever met in her entire existence, she was enamored with the lanky hairdresser.


    Several months of patience and featherlight pushing from Carmen had developed into progress for Shane and her acceptance of what she felt for the Latin beauty. ‘She isn’t so down on herself all the time, she’s off coke, she loves me, she…’ But did she love her? With everything they had been through with Jenny and Mark and her family… ‘Yeah, she loves me.’


    She could see the love in happy hazel-green or lust filled emerald eyes. She could hear it in that low husky voice when she said, often and always full of reverence and sincerity, I love you. She could feel it in gentle caresses that always made her flush with excitement and cause shivers in anticipation. She could taste it in her sweat as she licked and sucked and nipped at the ivory of her skin when they made love. She could smell it, because when there are no traces of Shane to be found, she missed her scent.


    She loves her. She wants to spend the rest of her life with her, but she thinks Shane isn’t ready.


    And as the taxi pulls up to her stop she comes to a conclusion; she knows she isn’t ready….


    And I get blinded when she opens the door


    She sat at the end of the bed, gazing intently at her backpack that sits in the corner of the hotel room. The contents of which contain the necessities she needs for her overnight stay; a toothbrush, toothpaste, a pair of jeans and a black t-shirt, her smokes, a box, her cellphone, The Celestine Prophecy by James Redfield, and her wallet. She’d emptied out her pockets in anticipation and nervousness, or rather to just have something to do while she waited. She scratched at the back of her head in an attempt to scratch away the apprehension. ‘Maybe this is a mistake’.

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    1. i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!

    4. This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D

    5. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    6. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    11. Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.

    12. Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb

    13. Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!

    15. So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please

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