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    Story written on November 6, 2005 by buildmeupbreakmedown.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=57488
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    And she just looks at me… and smiles


    And she just looks at me


    Carmen bundled up all the roses in one arm and moved her free hand to lift Shane’s chin up.


    She traced her fingers along Shane’s jaw to the back of her neck and gently pulled her down into a very deep kiss. Shane’s hands immediately left the confines of her pockets and went around her waist, gently running those slender fingers along the bold lines of the tattoo, pulling her in closer. She could feel the heat radiating off her body and it was threatening to have her tear off her lovers clothes off and have her way with her right there in the hall way.


    Accumulating whatever was left of her grip on reality, she broke the kiss, much to Shane’s apparent dismay as she gave a frustrated groan afterwards. She looked up into Shane’s eyes and saw that they had turned an entrancing deep emerald green and she willed herself not to shudder.


    Carmen brought her hand from the back of Shane’s neck around to her chest and gently pushed her back inside the hotel room, stopping a few steps before the foot of the bed. She turned to her right and placed the bouquet on the vanity dresser, admiring them briefly before facing Shane again.


    “So why are we here? You have an early appointment tomorrow.” Carmen asks while reaching up her hands to slide Shane’s jacket off her shoulders.


    “Because I thought I’d treat you” she shrugged off the black jacket and tossed it on to the chair next to the vanity.


    “And?” she could always tell when Shane was holding back, even when they first met she knew that she wasn’t divulging everything. It was almost strange how well in tune she was with Shane’s habits and feelings, ‘Must be that soul mate thing that people talk about’, she mused to herself.


    “And, the rest will come later” she moved quickly and scooped Carmen up in her arms, which resulted in a shriek and playful giggle. Walking over to the side of the bed, Shane very gently placed Carmen on the white sheets and climbed on top of her. Fitted snugly in between her brown-eyed-girl’s legs, she leaned down and kissed the right corner of her mouth, then the left, and finally brushed her lips against Carmen’s.

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    1. i love you! that was great!….and hot hot HOT! the song was a great backdrop for the story. wow shane asking carmen’s hand in marriage. thanks for a great sharmen story!

    4. This one should definately get an award! I loved this story! Makes me wish you’d write a sequal (cos this seemed like a stand-alone?). This made my little closet-romantic heart go pitty-pat lol. Seriously, very romantic; sweet beyond words; and as wittybanter said: “hot hot HOT” and the song did fit in here. Very nice. 5 stars for ya. No doubt. So, any way I, or anyone else, could possibly persuade you to do a sequal?? :D

    5. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    6. OMG!!!! this is da coolest shane ever. DAMN!! i hope carmen n shane get it 2gether to make dis last. oh dis is da sweetest thing in da world. **teary eyed** please post soon. PEACE.

    11. Puppy! I’m a sucker for foof, and you’ve combined it with some hot sex. This story would be stronger without the excerpts of lyrics or whatever they are.

    12. Great story, trying to make it hard on the rest of us are you. I’m so glad you’ve joined in. I hope you continue to write and I’ll continue to read. Great story and thank you. Deb

    13. Omg.omg.omg.That’s all I’m gonna say.;) Well I lie. YOU ROCK!!!!!! Love the song, love the story. I just wonder why did Carmen start to doubt if saying yes was the right thing to do? Does she think Shane will not go trough with it? And I must say that was one hot sex scene, totally made me horny:D Update soon PLEASE!!!

    15. So damn good. Shane’s romantic side is HOT! Pleasantly surprised by the proposal. What are Carmens doubts? Are they about herself or does she feel Shane is unable to completely change for this relationship? Con’t Please

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