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Something In Common
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“You wouldn’t have found it there anyway,” Tonya replied flippantly, her eyelids beginning to droop once more. She yawned hugely, and her eyelids fluttered.
Alice ground her teeth. Why do I have to have a conscience? The ‘old Alice’ wouldn’t have cared what happened to her. I’ve really changed lately. “C’mon, let’s go get you a cab.” She expected Tonya to argue, but it didn’t happen. Alice had to help the woman off the barstool and help her shuffle toward the door, Tonya throwing most of her weight onto Alice the whole way.
They stepped outside into the cooler night air, and Alice took a grateful breath. “What’s your address?” she asked Tonya, not believing that she was actually helping her.
“325,” Tonya mumbled, her head falling slightly to the side.
“325 what?” Alice asked, shaking Tonya to keep her conscious. When Tonya didn’t respond, Alice slapped her lightly. “Answer me.”
Tonya garbled something unintelligible before passing out again, her limp body weight causing Alice to strain. “***** you, Ton-Ton,” Alice muttered to herself, looking around in desperation. “I should just leave you here.” She sighed, knowing she couldn’t, and then proceeded to drag Tonya to the Mini and somehow managed to get her in the front seat and buckled in, where Tonya immediately laid her head against the window and began to snore.
Unable to figure out where Tonya lived, Alice did the only thing she could think of: she brought Tonya to her place. She struggled to get the comatose brunette in and unceremoniously dropped her into a heap on the couch. “There,” Alice said out loud. “I’ve done my good deed for the day. I’d better get rewarded for this.”
Leaving the slumbering Tonya on the couch, Alice wearily trudged to her room, not even bothering to turn on the light, and grabbed her pajamas before going into the bathroom to brush her teeth and get ready for bed. While in there, she thought she heard a rustling noise on the other side of the door, but when she turned off the faucet, she didn’t hear anything. Shrugging, Alice turned the water back on, figuring it was just her imagination and that Tonya had to still be out of it.
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hmmmm…interesting, plotting those two together. I liked it!
OMFG!!! That was hilarious…All the nonsense banter and arguing…*shakes head and wipes tears from eyes* Granted, it was TOTALLY ALIEN-STRANGE but really very good too. I need more
Don’t be scared of the Ton-Ton, Alice,” LMAO no one should ever be afraid of the Ton Ton. You did it, you immortalized Tonass! Are you going to pay for Alice’s therapy? brilliant!
wow this is really interesting, i liked it a lot.
The idea of tonass makes me say “ick” in my mind, but you have me intrigued foxfire. I hope you’ll continue. I’d love to see the other girls’ reaction to Tonya and Alice.
Wow, I can’t believe it, but I actually liked this alot. When I read the posts on the Danish thread about Tonass, I thought “no way,” but I actually liked this. You wrote Tonya and Alice very believably and I think I’d like to see more!
i liked it too! i’m amazed that i did. but i did.
that was soooo weird!…yet i liked it. janet reno in a bathing suit – loved that line. ^ – ^ it made me gag and laugh at the same time.
That, was HILARIOUS! Tonass is actually quite cute. Both characters were spot on and loved the constant bickering. Forget paying for Alice’s therapy, pay for mine because I’m still having a hard time believing Alice and Tonya “got jiggy with it”. Laughed my ass off at the Ton-Ton, just great!