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    Something so right – chapter 14

    Story written on January 16, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette just loved what a confident and certain kisser Tina was. She kissed like a lesbian should – they could and did kiss for hours. That was the mark of a truly great lesbian in Bette’s mind – she could kiss forever – only sex was better than kissing.

     

    Bette nodded “Yes and we can go exploring afterwards “

     

     

    Tina nodded and got off Bette’s knees. She quickly became aware that she couldn’t go out without a shower and a change of clothes – her dampness had spread to her trousers.

     

     

    “I need a quick shower and change. “ Tina said making her mind up “ You okay to wait ten minutes for me ?”

     

    Bette nodded “ Fine “

     

     

    Tina quickly found her wash bag and went into the bathroom. As she stepped under the hot water she reached down and touched herself. God – she was desperate for Bette’s fingers to touch her.

     

    What were they waiting for ? Well that was obvious – Bette was waiting for the green light and

    GO signal from Tina. When Bette had promised to wait Tina hadn’t expected her to be as

    patient as she as vowed. But she had quickly discovered that when Bette made a promise she

    took it very seriously . So Bette was waiting on Tina’s come on.

     

     

    As Tina poured shower gel onto her body she asked herself the next obvious question –

     

    What the hell are you waiting for Kennard ?

     

    Tina didn’t have an answer -. In her mind she had fantasised about their first time being after a romantic dinner and moonlit walk along a beach. But that was just that – a fantasy – this was reality. This was her life and she knew her mind well enough to know that she wanted to give herself totally to Bette.

     

     

    Bette was sitting on the edge of the bed flicking through the hotel’s brochure when the door opened. Tina came out wrapped in a giant white towel – Bette raised her eyebrows and smiled at Tina. Bette just had a thing about fair skinned women with water droplets still on their body – well she had a thing about ONE fair skinned woman wrapped in a towel with her body still damp from the shower.

     

     

    Tina looked at Bette – she had no doubts – this was what her heart was crying out for. She longed for her touch and taste. Slowly she walked across to Bette and kissed her.

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    2. See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.

    4. Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.

    8. Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.

    9. WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.

    12. Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS

    19. Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.

    25. Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.

    26. Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.

    31. Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!

    32. Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC

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