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    Something so right – chapter 14

    Story written on January 16, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68247
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    Bette just loved what a confident and certain kisser Tina was. She kissed like a lesbian should – they could and did kiss for hours. That was the mark of a truly great lesbian in Bette’s mind – she could kiss forever – only sex was better than kissing.

     

    Bette dropped the brochure she was carrying and pulled Tina close. Fresh out of the shower she smelt wonderful. After they had kissed for a few minutes Tina pulled her lips away and stroked Bette’s face

     

    “How hungry are you ?”

     

    “Why ?”

    “There is something that I want to do “

     

    Bette raised a quizzical eyebrow

     

    “And what is that ?”

     

    Tina took a single step back and pulled the towel so it fell from her body. Bette felt her breathing stop – she was looking at the most perfect body. Tina was naked and standing looking at her. Bette tried to take in everything at once – the long slender legs, the well groomed and tantalising pubic area, the flat stomach and clearly defined abs, a slim waist and full and perfect breasts.

     

    “Oh God “ Bette muttered

     

    “I want to give you my body and I want you to take me “

     

    Bette as about to ask if Tina was sure but she realised in time what a silly statement that was. Tina was standing in front of her naked- naked and beautiful. Bette looked into Tina’s eyes and saw how sure her so-to-be lover was. There was no fear or trepidation in her eyes – Tina was more than ready to take the final leap with her. Bette let out a giant breath of air

     

    “Can I touch you ?”

     

    Tina nodded – Bette reached out and stroked Tina’s thigh – it was so soft and obviously well

    toned – she stroked it up and down -her eyes drawn to Tina’s soft pubic hairs – she wanted to be between her thighs tasting her lover . She longed to make Tina her lover.

     

     

    Bette had been panicking over how she was going to approach their first time- she wanted it to be right. She was determined to give Tina a first time that would forever stay in my mind. Bette stood up and faced Tina.

     

    “You are so amazing Tina “

     

    “So are you -I want you Bette -this is the green light you have been telling me since you asked me out. This is a full access pass Bette – I want you “

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    2. See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.

    4. Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.

    8. Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.

    9. WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.

    12. Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS

    19. Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.

    25. Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.

    26. Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.

    31. Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!

    32. Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC

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