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Something so right – chapter 14
Bette reached out a hand and traced Tina’s collar bone until she reached the middle of her neck then she slowly moved her hand downwards until it reached the curve of Tina’s breast. Bette let out a tiny noise that actually hide the huge roar of passion that was building up as she moved lower. She stopped before she reached the nipple -she was too dressed for this – she needed to show Tina her trust had not been misplaced.
Bette kissed Tina on the end of the nose and moved back.
She quickly cast off her sun-top revealing a thin black bra. She stepped out of her shorts and smiled. Tina was looking at her with no attempt to disguise how much she was turned on by Bette’s strip -that was always good for Bette’s ego. Bette had no doubt that she could go out that night and pull just about any woman she wanted. But the equation had changed – Bette only wanted one woman – Tina.
Bette quickly unhooked her bra and let it drop to the floor-, she also stepped out of her pants – all the while looking at Tina’s face. Tina gasped
“What ?”
“ I have been trying to prepare myself for seeing you naked for the first time but God Bette – you have a killer body “
“Takes one to know one “ Bette replied smiling.
“Bed ? “ Tina said suggestively
“Good plan – but something first “
“What ?”
Bette took hold of Tina and pulled her into a full body embrace. They both gasped . For Tina it was the feeling of two pairs of breasts coming together and touching. The sensation of Bette’s slightly hard nipples pressing into the soft flesh of her breasts sent a shock wave of sensations shooting through her body. Bette pulled Tina as close as possible enjoying every point of contact -toes, thighs, pubic areas, stomachs and of course breasts. Bette stroked Tina’s hair and kissed her brow
“I am going to take good care of you “
“We are going to take good care of each other “ Tina replied smiling
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(10 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Oi, no time to read right now. Will have to read later. :O
See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.
Nice update this is going a very nice vacation.
Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.
The only word that springs to mind is – lovely. You just dont know how to disappoint either do you Ally? Let the love fest continue:-)
That was beautiful.How does anyone not feel Bette and Tina?
thats what i sound like when i have a delish meal!!! im just kidding ;). that was fun. thx.
Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.
WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.
ah….I think I’m gay now too! Thanks Bette…er…or should I say Ally! LOL!
Beautifully written and so gentle Bette has her soul mate. Tina will do Bette the next favor. Poor Bette will have a small heart attach. thanks
Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS
Wow, Ally — amazing chapter. Both very hot and very beautifully written. And did I mention hot? Thanks so much for the new chapter!
Oh God!!! That was so worth waiting for. Bette’s turn next, right?
Thank you for responding to your fans requests. OMFG.
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! I love all your stories!! PPS! You have such a way with these two. :)
WOW!
very nice ally… i love it when they both take there time… and their true love shows…
Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.
Finally read it! lol At work of course. LMFAO But it’s the end of the day so weeeeeeeee! Good job. :D
Okay you are just the best… you never disapoint me, you just keep rockin !! thanks for sharing your talent for writing with us
Now that was beautiful!
Awesome – the respect Bette had given Tina has been beautiful.
That was beautiful and hot, can’t wait to see Bette turn. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.
Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.
at last,,,,very sweet and loving, thx, pps
Fabulous chapter! So sweet and passionate. I love all the feeling you put into your writing.
nope no words for how good that chapter was… *thud*
Think I’m gay now, too!!! Thanks Bette!!! LOL
Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!
Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC