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Something so right – chapter 21
Tina decided that the game had gone on long enough – she wanted action and satisfaction. She took hold of Bette and they started to kiss – Bette was kissing Tina as passionately as she could. Tina opened her mouth – inviting and getting Bette’s tongue inside of her mouth. Bette reached down and grabbed Tina’s ass quickly beginning to grind her hips against her lovers. Both were frantically touching and feeling the other woman – Bette took Tina’s nipple between her thumb and forefinger and pulled at it – Tina gasped between kisses as she pushed her hand between Bette’s thighs and started moving two fingers back and forward through Bette’s inner lips. She moved her thumb until she found Bette’s clit and began her assault on it.
Bette cried out as Tina began to make love to her – she copied Tina’s actions but instead of moving through Tina’s lips she entered her with one swift movement of her wrist – pushing two fingers deep inside her lover – finding and beginning work on Tina’s G-spot in what felt to Tina like a split second. Tina moaned as Bette’s expert fingers began to fuck her hard. This was the wildest sex they had shared so far and both women were clearly into it – Tina was riding Bette’s hand while she worked on Bette’s clit and entered her with one finger. Bette was holding Tina tight as they quickly came to their orgasms together- Tina was letting out tiny noises of release and Bette was groaning as they drove one another higher and higher. Tina came first by only a few seconds – she cried out disregarding their semi private location. She was crying out as she plunged deeper into Bette and was rewarded by feeling Bette’s inner walls contract and her hand be soaked in her lover’s juices as Bette’s orgasm slammed into her.
They both were gasping for air as they held onto the other and slowly came back down to normality. Bette removed her fingers from Tina and used her hand to pull her lover into a closer hug. Tina remained deep inside Bette, loving how good it felt to have her hand in so intimate a place. Tina opened her eyes and kissed Bette on the lips
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Hello AllyE, Thank you for all your wonderful posts today. This one was magnificent. Completely blown away by your talent and way with words. Bette and Tina could have stepped into ice water and made it a hot tub as their intimacy heated up the moment. Loved your references to Season 1, Episode 2 shower scene. Cute, too fucking cute. There was almost a tragedy as Tina ran away but what sweetness followed as Bette explained the situation and stated her thoughts on their connection. Give Tina her grandmother’s ring was a commitment to their future together. Can’t wait ot see what happens when they return to the real world and the gang sees the meaning of true love. More please. many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Ally, I haven’t left a comment for a while (sorry about that) but I have read every chapter. This is such an amazing story and as usual you Rock! Thanks for the post and waiting for the next! =)
just lovely..
Hey AllyE , well first things first Soooo gald that your back !! missed you !!. And what a way to announce that you are back and the best in the FANfic writing with two of the most exceptional stories going. Give us more and as usual I cannot wait for next posting Big thanks your loyal fan CG
I just love these two in this story. Great chapter! Post again soon, please!
Nice touch with the ending and Tina keeping the ring for Bette…nice update…
Wow, SO beautiful I really love the direction that this story is taking, thank you so much for the up date.
Ally this was so good.I even got a bit emotional.Sometimes taking a risk can go either way and it looks like its a positive risk.
Lovely, Ally. The ring thing – so sweet
Well, these two are certainly not disfunctional/toxic as so many have called them in this story. I love the way you write them Ally, can’t wait for your next update.
Let’s see we have sexy, hot steamy sex filled with love. Then we get the soulmates sweetness and happiness. And you top it off with a promise of a future to come. You are AWESOME!
Thanks Ally. That was just beautiful–how loving and tender they are with each other. I love the way Bette is sharing herself.
well that was sweet. thx
What an incredibly beautiful update!
hi ally, i’m sorry to hear that you’ve been going true a rough periode i hope you start feeling better soon! But i’m also very glad to see that you are back with your great story’s!! i’ve missed your fantastic writing! really so glad to see your back with us
AWWWWWEEEEEEEE how freakin’ incredible this chapter is!! bette i really letting her walls down for one miss kennard! as long as they talk they will be fine…please let them stay on vacation forever, hehe… :)
Woah, the end just knocked me off my feet. I can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. I love that Bette is letting herself go emotionally in ways she never has before..and that she is already planning things like having James take over more work, working out, and spending time with Tina. Its really beautiful.
That was hot and awesome!