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    Something so right -chapter 25

    Story written on February 22, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Tina talks to Helena and then Bette and Tina go to the gym

     

    Bette wasn’t sitting on the benches when Tina entered the changing rooms. A couple of women walked past Tina wrapped in towels while Tina retrieved her bag and took a large towel out as well as her shower gel and shampoo. Tina quickly stripped naked and walked towards the communal showers. As she looked around for Bette she spotted her in one of the single shower cubicles. Glancing around Tina hung her towel up and stepped into the cubicle

     

    Bette was just rinsing soap from her hair

     

    “Hello “

     

    “Fancy you dropping in “ Bette said taking hold of Tina and pulling her close

     

    “I didn’t think you were shy “

     

    “I’m not – I hoped that you would have the sense to finish your session and join me “

     

    Tina raised her eyebrow

     

    “Really ?”

     

    Bette placed both of her hands on Tina’s face and kissed her – the kiss was passionate and long. When Bette ended the kiss they were both breathing hard

     

    “You knew what you were doing to me “ Bette accused

     

    “Me ?” Tina was grinning

     

    “There are consequences to your actions Ms Kennard “

     

    “I know that “

     

    Bette took hold of Tina’s hand and swiftly placed it between her thighs

     

    “Interesting “ Tina said slipping her fingers between Bette’s folds and let them sink into the deep moisture. Bette caught her gasp before it came from her mouth and kissed Tina hard. Tina needed no second encouragement – she quickly found Bette’s clit and pressed against it. Bette sighed as Tina started to gently stimulate her lover. Tina looked at Bette

     

    “Can you keep silent ?” she asked quietly

    Bette nodded

     

    Tina kissed Bette as she began to rub Bette’s clit. Bette was moving against Tina’s movements as they kissed. Tina knew that it would only take five or ten minutes to get her lover to her orgasm – she wanted to be deep inside her. She needed to be able to feel Bette’s inner walls as they shared their need for one another. Tina gently shifted her hand so she could sink one finger deep inside Bette. Bette broke the kiss and let out the tiniest moan. Tina kissed her quietly as she moved in and out of Bette with more speed.

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    5. Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.

    11. Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!

    14. HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC

    19. Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS

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