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    Something so right -chapter 25

    Story written on February 22, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Tina talks to Helena and then Bette and Tina go to the gym

     

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    Tina’s gym was state of the art and Bette liked the pleasant changing rooms and good quality equipment. She allowed herself to be shown round the machines by one of instructors so she was ten minutes behind Tina by the time she had started her circuit of the gym. Tina was doing some bicep curls with a bar bell as Bette began on the rowing machine. Bette was watching Tina with appreciation – she had just the most fantastic body – well toned and she was brown from their holiday in Hawaii.

     

     

    For five minutes Bette just lost herself in thoughts about Tina – about how passionate she was in bed, like how when they lay recovering from sex she had to get so close to Bette to hold her. Bette was so carried away in her own thoughts that she didn’t see Tina turning and looking at her. Tina saw the far away look in her lover’s eyes and knew that she was thinking about her. Glancing behind Bette she saw a handsome, 6ft man checking Bette out – well she couldn’t blame him -Bette was moving with grace on that rowing machine.

     

    Tina winked at her lover and moved onto the next piece of equipment which she knew Bette was also going to be getting a thrill from seeing her own. Well if Bette wanted a cheap thrill while she was supposed to be working out Tina would make sure that she got it.

     

    Over the next 30 minutes Tina varied her routine so she was always in front of Bette – whatever piece of equipment that Bette moved to, Tina moved a few minutes later. Tina was fully aware of what she was doing to Bette – by stretching her body during her exercises she made sure that Bette always had a great view of her cute ass or breasts. Tina managed to stop herself from looking at Bette – she just KNEW that her lover was suffering -and it was going to be interesting to see what “punishment “ Bette dished out when they were alone later on.

     

     

    Tina was just finishing off her stint on the rowing machine when she saw Bette heading through the double doors heading towards the changing rooms. Tina chuckled – that rather spelt a victory to her. She carried on for five more minutes before she collected her towel and water bottle and headed towards the changing room

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    5. Great chapter, I am glad Tina found her backbone and decided to go out with Bette and friends. She needs to show all the beautiful people that Bette is hers and hers alone. On to dinner and payback.

    11. Helena being a supportive friend for Tina was priceless. I love getting to read the sweet tender moments of Bette and Tina’s romance. And then (whoo-ee) the sizzling hot love making in the shower. Girl you know how to write it!

    14. HEY Ally, Thank you for showing a great variety of exercises that can get you all hot and bothered at the gym. Tina’s chat with Helena helped Tina deal with some of her worries re Bette’s legend status. Then Helena got to see Bette and Tina in action and was forced to admit that this pair genuinely care for each other. Wonderful writing. Then tina’s teasing of Bette. Hard to resist the image of Tina working out. Followed by the most magnificent shower scene. Mmmm. Loving everything you write. I am totally addicted to your talent and style. Many, mnay thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    18. Hello Ally, I see you have managed to incorporate all of that time at the gym into your writing… brilliant. I absolutely love how you are unfolding this story… and I cannot wait to see if it is Tina who is showing off Bette or if it is Bette who is showing off Tina… and alas we shall have some jealousy storm out… ohh yeah… awesome stuff my friend… completely awesome. Sincerely, JC

    19. Yay! We had a snow day..and this made my day. I like how Helena is coming around.. giving Bette a chance to prove her love for Tina. I think she will be the support Tina needs for the Liquid run. Hopefully it will go well because B/T need to show a united front especially the first time they go there together. The gym scene made me want to go work out. PPS

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