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Something so right – chapter 61
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“We will come up with some sort of solution “ Bette assured her “ Nothing is too good for you – we will make it work. Your mom will come round to me in time and we will make it work with Finn around “
Tina stroked Bette’s cheek with one finger and kissed her again
“I sometimes think that it is impossible to love you any more than I do but I fall deeper every
day – you are just the best. There is no doubt in my mind that I am going to spend the rest of my life with you “
Bette closed her eyes for a few seconds
“I hope you know that my self control – for which I am famed – is stretched to breaking point. When I get you in that room you get no say – I am just going to take you – I am just putting you on warning “
Tina moaned “ You are not helping my self control at the moment “
Bette kissed Tina with more force – the blonde ended the kiss
“Lets get this bed sorted out then we can show him where everything is, hand him the remote and leave him to it “
Bette nodded “See – I am too busy thinking about sex – you are brilliant babe “
“And you are looking more fuck-able by the nano second. I will go and get him a duvet and some pillows “
“I will pull the bed out and move some of the more breakable items “
When Finn finally buzzed the door the lovers were standing in the middle of the room kissing
softly. Bette eased away and pressed the button to allow him access to the building. In a few minutes he walked in carrying a paper sack full of food
“Finn – what the hell is all of that ?” Tina demanded
“That is such a cool shop “
“Is that why it took you half an hour ?” Bette asked glancing at her watch
“No – I was talking to the guy about music – he was telling me about some of the great bands that play around here “
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Oh man fin couldn’t have called tina first? very immature, especially not to let his parents know, whose is next their little sister will? :)PPS
Hello Ally, Great update! Bette’s frustration was so hysterical and her taking it out on Finn was a real treat. No wonder Tina was in stitches. SHame that Finn’s arrival caused Tina’s tenuous relationship with her mother to weaken further. Especially as it upset Tina so much. I do think that Tina and her mom need to sort this out once and for all. Perhaps Bette will find a way to heal this wound. More to the point I hope that Bette and Tina can find some alone time and really enjoy each other’s company. Hot sex loving is due for this stressed out couple. Please let there be love… Many thanks for a fantastic rollercoaster ride. Your Loyal Fan.
Finn is probably thinking wow my sister is one lucky woman. PS
Alpha Bette at this point is funny but I do understand her frustrations. Is Willow showing up next? Tina’s mother has a lot of nerve accusing her but, we don’t know what Finn has been talking about or threatening to leave and we don’t know what has been going on at the farm between the rest of the family. Then he just up and disappears without a thought to anyone else and how they might feel about that. Kids.Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
Bette in frustration is cracking me up, and its only Fridau right. Just fantastic
Wow, That line was so sexy! Bette ordering Tina to get on the bed – I thought I was going to die. Amazing chapter! Now let’s see what else Bette tells Tina to do … hehehe. Thanks for posting! PPS!
O.K., there’s an easy resolution to this problem…Bett and Tina only have this weekend off and they had planned on it being a love fest…so they make good money, either they get a hotel for the weekend or they pay for Finn at a hotel for the weekend. Monday, everyone’s back at work and the 3 of them are back at the apartment together. Great chapter Ally!
I really got frustrated just reading how this Finn interrupted their weekend plans, I feel for Bette, poor thing she doesn’t needed all the family popping up in their house like that, if I were her I would change the address and not tell them what is it for awhile. God, Ally will you please send him away, he is so getting on my nerves. Post soon please. Love
“Is the apartment on fire ?” “Can you smell gas ?”ha ha haLOVE your story
That was funny and Tina need to do something quick or Bette gonna go crazy with her frustrations, poor Finn show up not in a good time lol. Please more, thanks!
He may be tall, but Finn is nowhere near being a man. He ran away from home without telling Mommy or Daddy for fear he’d never escape (I wasn’t aware the farm was encircled with razor wire) and couldn’t be bothered to call ahead. If that’s the best he can do he really should go home until he’s a bit more grown up.
Wonder what Finn wanted. But love a frustrated Bette and love this story! Thanks for posting!