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Something so right -chapter 63
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“Everyone is in “
“Who ?”
“Helena, Alice, Shane and Dana “
“Oh God – well I suppose it has to be done “
Bette opened the door and allowed Tina and Finn to walk in.
Shane looked up from her coffee and spotted Tina and then Bette
“I thought B & T were going to be having an intimate weekend “
“Lots of sex “ Alice confirmed “Why ?”
“They just walked in “
Helena looked up “That has blown things for them “
“Why ?”
“That is Tina’s brother “
“Who ? “ Dana asked
“The bean pole with the blonde hair “
“God grief – so that is Tina’s brother ?” Alice exclaimed
“Sure is – Finn the farmer “
“Hey there “ Shane waved them over. Bette took hold of Tina’s hand – she felt that her partner needed to know that she was supporting her. Tina did appreciate Bette’s improved attitude – she might be critical in private but Tina had no doubt that Bette would support her in public.
“Hey – what are you two doing out of bed ?” Alice couldn’t resist the dig
“Hey there – this is my baby brother – Finn Kennard – Finn you have met Helena before – This is Dana, Shane and Alice “ Tina pointed each woman out
“Hey there “ he beamed “ Wow Tina – you have very cute friends “
Bette spoke in his ear “ Tina has very gay friends “
Finn looked at Bette “Really ? “
Bette nodded “Oh yes “
The others were stifling laughs
“I didn’t know that your brother was visiting you “ Alice persisted
“Sudden decision “ Bette said
“I was waiting for them when they arrived home last night “
“I bet that didn’t go down well given how horny they were last night” Alice said to Dana
“I am sure they were delighted to see you Finn “ Dana grinned
Finn looked around the café “ I am starving sis “
“I know – we all are “
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Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS