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    Something so right -chapter 63

    Story written on December 11, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Finn’s first day in the big city

     

    “It is going really well -I am further ahead than I have ever been. That is thanks to Tina and her time management skills – I couldn’t have done this without her”

     

    Bette took Tina’s hand and kissed it

     

    “Wow – I didn’t know there was so many different types of coffee – which one would I like Tina ?”

     

    Dana and Alice sniggered – earning themselves a dirty look from Tina

     

    “Try one and find out for yourself “ Bette replied “Are you hungry or not ?”

     

     

    “Starving – did you say I could have anything ?”

     

    “You can “ Bette squeezed Tina’s hand and they exchanged looks. There was no doubt that Tina was finding this hard

     

    “What do you fancy sweetie ?” Bette asked

     

    “Not hungry “

     

    Finn looked up “ You must be “

     

    “Why is that ? “ Alice was like a dog with a bone when she saw the chance to tease Bette and Tina about their sex life

     

    Finn looked at Alice for a few seconds “ Just because I haven’t seen her eat anything yet “

     

    “I bet she was tucking into something last night by the way they were all over each other when they left the club “ Dana commented

     

    Tina blushed and looked away

     

    Finn would have had to be very stupid not to understand the inference. He regarded Dana with a raised eyebrow

     

    “I saw my sister date some full time losers when she lived at home. Guys who were just jerks with no prospects at all. I have never seen her as happy as she is with Bette – and Bette is just the coolest person I know. I hope that I can find a woman to love me the way Bette loves Tina “

     

    This speech was so unexpected that everyone went silent – Tina was very proud of her brother

     

     

    “How about I just go and order you everything on the menu “ Bette said in delight. He probably hadn’t ended the ribald comments about their sex life but he had shown that he was not stupid and he was very loyal to Bette and Tina

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    1. Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.

    3. Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!

    4. AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.

    7. Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!

    10. It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love

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