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Something so right -chapter 63
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“Well you would be – sorry Bette “
“Finn “
“Sorry Bette – no cracks about your sex life with Tina “
No one held back the laughter this time – Tina sighed. Bette put her arm around Tina
“Its okay “
“Finn -come and sit next to me “ Alice grabbed a chair and pulled it into a spare space beside
her – what a heaven sent opportunity to wind Bette and Tina up
“Lets get to know you – any brother of Tina’s is a friend of ours – what were you saying about their sex life ?”
Bette took two chairs and made a space for her and Tina
Finn smiled at Alice “ I promised not to say anything “
“A promise he would be wise to remember regardless of the number of questions Alice asks “
Tina pulled two chairs up and sat down beside Helena – Bette sat on the other side to her
“So what brings you to LA – if that isn’t a leading question ?” Alice asked
“I want to find a job and a place of my own “
“Life not very interesting down on the farm ?” Dana asked
“I want some new experiences “
“How did you parents react ?” Shane spoke
“I didn’t tell them “
“Why ? “ Alice was onto the comment in a flash
Bette could sense that Tina was not enjoying this – telling everyone about their rubbish
Thanksgiving had been bad enough but this was worse if Finn spoke as honestly as he had so far
“Finn – the menu is in front of you – why don’t you order what you want on me ?”
Bette spoke. The comment about food made him take the menu and study it carefully
“Why did you decide to leave the farm – have you told your mom yet ?” Alice persisted
“Tina told her “ Finn looked up briefly but it was clear that his interest was firmly on the menu in front of him.
“How’s the exhibition ? “ Helena asked Bette – she could see that Tina was not enjoying the way the conversation was going
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Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS