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Something so right -chapter 63
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“Okay – I know what I want – is this a totally gay café ?” he asked
“No – why ?” Tina spoke
“Because that is one cute waitress over there “
“Go and order your food “ Bette said smiling
He got up and strolled across.
“I’ll go and order some food for us “ Tina said to Bette
“You hungry all of a sudden ? “ Shane teased
“I need to keep my strength up “ Tina replied smiling
While Tina was missing they all watched Finn chatting to the waitress – he came across and whispered something to Bette – she laughed and nodded. When he walked away again Helena asked the question
“What was all that about ? “
“He was asking if it was alright if he went out tonight “
“Terri agreed to go out with him ! “ Shane exclaimed “ Every guy who comes in here tries and they all get rejected “
“I told him he didn’t have a cat in hell’s chance while he was wearing that shirt”
“For you to under estimate the pulling power of a Kennard is very odd “ Shane laughed
“I know – I told him I would buy him some new shirts “
“Looks like he isn’t going to need them “
Finn came back after five minutes
“I got me a date “ he announced
“WHAT ! “ Tina said who had just come back to her seat
“Terri is meeting me here at 7 – she was telling me about a great band “
It was obvious that Tina was about to object but she sighed
“”Okay – we will get you a key cut so you don’t get us out of bed if you come back late “
Bette beamed – she could suddenly see her romantic weekend with Tina getting back on track.
“You approve Bette ? “ Alice asked teasing
“I think Finn is a young man with no ties – of course he should be out meeting new people and having new experiences “
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Please not a “friendship” ring. Or worse still, an “abstinence” ring. Do you have those silly things in Britain, Ally? Since you guys shipped most of your fundamentalists over here generations ago, I’m hoping you’ve escaped some of our sillier repressive attitudes borne of puritanism. No, I don’t think I have to worry about Bette giving Tina one of those.
Nice very nice. Finn may prove to fit right in.
Why else would you buy your girlfriend a ring except to ask her to marry you…otherwise just buy her some other jewelry. Ask her Bette…I’ll bet she says yes! Ally…simply superb…again!
AllyE great chapter. Finn, once his farm edges are smoothed off wil be quite a gentleman. One that knows how to take care of his family and not let anyone (Alice) intefere or get more info than they need. He is a quick learner and I loved how he came to our girls’ defense when Alice asked just one too many questions. If just once her brain would engage before her mouth it would be lovely and put the brakes on that mouth before it says something it shouldn’t. Alice has a heart of gold but she does insane things sometimes. And as far I’m concerned it is not part of her charm. Good job. Post when you can.
Finn is adorable. And what a wonderful development on the lovely twosome. Go fo the ring Bette
Every chapter of every story is outstanding.
Finn is cute and like the way he protect Bette and Tina. Maybe Bette should buy Tina watch or earings or neckles but not a ring if she not ask her to marry her. PPST!
Finn is so sweet. I am glad Bette wants to buy Tina a ring. Now Bette ask that wonderful woman to be your wife. Thank you Ally
don’t buy tina a watch, IC has everyone breaking up when they buy a watch! finn is adorable,lol… alice is too much. bette needs to ask tina! :)PPS
It’s a great idea, and Bette should totally do it as soon as possible, and I like the way they are dealing with Finn. Thanks Ally, can’t wait for the next post. Love
a ring huuu ? this is getting serious :)thanks ally and PPS