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Something so right – chapter eight
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“But I know that it isn’t fair and part of me worries that its going to be too much for you – I want you but I know that it could be too hard for you “
Bette moved her fingers from Tina’s face to her fair hair -she took a couple of strands of hair and let it slip through her fingers. Tina’s hair felt so good – – it was always soft and smelt like heaven. Bette let out a long life time sigh.
“Bette – you forget that I am a big girl – I can look after myself -yeah I guess your harem will be pissed off – well guess what they will have to get used to me “
Bette smiled and stroked Tina’s hair
“There was someone – about three years ago. She was called Kate and I really liked her. She was a post grad student at UCLA – I was 26 and she was 21. In the end she couldn’t deal with my reputation and she dumped me. At the time I just reacted arrogantly -told everyone that I wasn’t really interested in her -that she was too young and naïve for me. “
Bette looked away across to the sea. Tina rested her finger on Bette’s face and brought it back to look at her
“When in truth it hurt ?” Tina asked. Bette nodded.
Just being with Tina, for some reason made Bette want to open up and confess all of these sensitive topics. If any other woman had talked – like Tina just had about wanting to learn everything about her – that would have scared Bette senseless. But with Tina -with Tina it felt right.
“Poor Bette “
Bette smiled “I want to be close to you – I want to know everything about you that you are prepared to tell me “
Tina swallowed “ It hasn’t been very long “
“Its long enough for me to know how much I want you and how much we click. I know that its not long enough for us to become lovers but I know that its more than long enough for us to both instinctively know that we have something so right “
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).