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Something so right – chapter eight
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Tina nodded “ You feel that as well ?”
“I felt if from the first time I looked at you. The longer we are together the more I know that you are someone that I am can’t mess around or hurt or just brush aside when I am in a mood. I am not the easiest person in the world Tina – I am arrogant and insecure in the weirdest ways, I am demanding and a perfectionist “
“Sounds just what I need “Tina replied smiling “As long as you are open with me – that’s all I ask of you “
Bette could feel her heart pounding hard against her chest – being this open scared the life out of her. But she also felt safe with Tina – this blonde was someone who Bette could trust with her fears and hopes and ambitions.
Bette nodded – she could feel a tear in her eye . Tina saw the tear and softly wiped it away
“Bit of sand in your eye “ she said “Now are we going to eat ?“
Bette nodded “ Thank you “
“Thank you “ Tina smiled “Now feed me “
An hour later they both lay on the blanket with their eyes closed
“Do you know much about the sea ?” Tina asked
“A little bit why ?”
“If I am still lying here when the tide comes in will I get mistaken for a beached whale and swept out to the ocean ?“
Bette giggled “My sister certainly knows how to pack a picnic basket “
“I am stuffed “
“Me too “
“Just one question “
“Yeah ? “ Tina looked across at Bette
“Did we eat the basket as well – I feel like we did “
“You had three chicken legs and two rolls and two scotch eggs “
“ I love those “”
“I noticed “ Tina smiled reaching out her hand and taking Bette’s
“You okay ? “ Bette asked looking across at the blonde
“Fine – stuffed to bursting point but great -thank you Bette “
“We might have to go and thank Kit “
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As usual your stories are wonderful, tender etc etc etc. Thanks for posting this before the new year. I was hoping that you would give us all a chapter for the new year. Have a wonderful new year. Ps did like the scotch eggs line.. its been so long since I last had one. So it brought a smile to my face.
that was some kiss well worth the wait for both of them! happy new year !
Yay. I love this one. I totally hope Tina starts to be more comfortable with everything.
You know, I check everyday for this story. Thanks so much! I am glad Tina has figured out what she wants and had the confidence to go after it, on a beach, no less! Thanks for you time and effort with this story…looking forward to your next post…
Ally, you are one of the most sensual writers on this site. Very few of you can project the beauty and emotion that you do in your written words. Thank you that was absolutely beautiful! Happy New Year to you and I wish you a healthy and prosperous 2008!
Love first kisses…they r so sweet…thanks Ally…and happy New Year…
A great way to end 2007. Perfection.
yeah, wow, lucky tina [ pout]; i’m just jealous…pps
That’s why Jodi’s kisses could never measure up to Tina’s (Lu Holloman). They just fit together. PPS. Happy and healthy New Year.
Well I got my New Years wish.I hope you do too.
Hmm, by the time they get to and NC-17 Tina will be ripping off Bette’s clothes!
That was so sweet yet passionate..thanks Ally and happy New Year
Finally……..the kiss I’ve been waiting for. Thanks Ally & Happy New Year!
Oh finally I loved this chapter Ally and I wish you a happy and peaceful New Year too. Thanks dear
That was so sweet and cute, beautiful first kiss!
Oh God. That was great!
mm mmm i want to kiss Bette Porter!
WOW! How sweet they are together! Thanks, you make my new years eve!
Oh AllyE, that chapter was so sweet and loving. Their tender connection and the passion that they both felt,especially Tina and the kiss. I could see it, you described it so beautifully. Love this story as well as all your others. I’ve said this before, you should be writing for a living. As my editor said t me, “the world is waiting.” Happy new year everyone. PPS
That chapter was so incredible, I loved Bette and Tina’s first kiss. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
it’s 2.30am where I’m at. stayed awake just waiting for this story, that’s how much I love it. Am too sleepy to make any useful comments. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks Ally.
It’s about time Tina found the courage of her convictions. And let’s all be grateful that Kit cooked the chicken.
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Hi Ally, this story just blows me away. I wish I can kiss Bette too :P You know, you should seriously consider writing for a screenplay, it’ll be such a high for us. Anyway, hope 2008 will bring you much joy, happiness, laughter, good health, good luck and many many more writings. Cheers!
Yey! I’ve waiting for this story… thank you for posting. Have a great New Year ahead!
well i wanna see a frog on acid. ;D hope your new years eve was good. thx
Hey Ally, Happy 2008! Thanks for another great chapter. And of course an image I’ll never be able to erase from my memory in comparing Alice to a “frog on acid.” Now that’s an image (LOL).